cultivation is literally the worst thing you could have chosen as a cheat. not because it isn't strong but because it feals cheap. the only thing people ever change about cultivation in novels is the names of realms and cultivation methods, the energy being cultivated and what makes the mc's cultivation different from other cultivators. and so far yours isnt much different. now im not saying that its bad because i dont like cultivation, that would stupid of me. all im saying is you should maybe try and stand out a bit in that aspect, for example you kinda fallowed the Chinese naming thing where they give stuff long and cringy name, (or aleast i thought it was cringy lol) and honestly i just dont thing cultivation fits very well in 40k, but i really do think you can make it work so ill keep reading and hope this turns out to be just as good as your other works.
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cultivation is the most amazing and probably most overpowered cheat, the issue is the slave thing
It’s the most boring way to get strong . And the most boring power system to write about
So? It’s fun to read about and it works great in any setting.
Please sigin me up for when the mc defeats the Equivalent of a stage 2 star powered elder when he’s barely low earth power. Plus with his ancestor grade weapon. Oh and the Jade beauty he stole from the elders grandson.
Nah it's not. Even without omnipotence I know 5 powers who are just better
well dont put us in suspence what are they
Meta Ability Creation, Reality Warping, Absolute Transcendence, Causality Manipulation, Concept Inbodiment and Perfect Copy.
whats absolute transcendence
All of those are things you don't have to work on
I enjoy cultivation because it's something that can grow through the effort of the character. By this i don't mean a bad chinese novel where every chapter they have a different boost.
If there was something i personally hated in fanfics it would be gacha systems.
I am fairly sure you can achieve all of that if you become a powerful enough cultivator.
And?
It's just personal taste, i like stories where the main character has to work for their power. so it feels like they deserve it. weakToStrong basically. a really good example would be xia by couer dal aran (i don't know if I spelled it correctly.). it is a wuxia rwby fanfiction and it has this really interesting dynamic of master and disciple that i like. It's not cultivation but the story is still great.
