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Venerable_Far
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2022-08-19 18:02

writing quality and world background carry this story, typical female slave/servant in the first 6 chapters who hes sharing his cultivation stuff with doesn't give me a good feeling for this story, usually cultivation fanfics are really interesting but when you start simping/sharing your power with other people without equal benefits its not worth it. Stop handing out freebies to people who don't even deserve them, the servants character isn't even that likeable.

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Celestial_Chaos24
Celestial_Chaos24Lv4

What does it mean? Is this novel a harem or not?

Venerable_Far
Venerable_FarLv11

if its a harem it goes down to 1 star

Celestial_Chaos24:What does it mean? Is this novel a harem or not?
Axton1
Axton1Lv4

Idk if you kept reading this but he’s gotten like 1 other girl

Venerable_Far:if its a harem it goes down to 1 star
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