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Paulcait15hCommentedI mean, with all the skills, technologies, new pokemon moves and the system i doubt he won't get it back.
The stuff that can be turned into weapons or armor I was going to flat out sell in auction to the highest bidder. The sole exception was some of it's skull that I was going to fashion into an eyepatch. To get it all to fit into my bag I had Vulcan bend it down into a smaller size before I stuffed it in my bag. The blood of the Heatran would have also been very valuable but that had flowed out of it's body while we were all out and been burnt up in the lava.-- Paulcait15hCommented
knocked out*
'Well that explains why it made me nervous to look at , it was powerful enough to one shot the thing.' I then started looking around for my team and found them scattered about but mostly intact. Rune was looking in rough shape but would live much the same as Vulcan where they both lay knocked up. Yani was almost entirely unscathed but had clearly exhausted herself as she was also out nearby myself. Gaia was still in the wall but was knocked out from exhaustion and damage. - - Paulcait20hReplied to Paulcait
Or is it in the wiki?
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It's not guaranteed that it is dyed. The weird hair color is a result of generations of weird quirks.
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Shoot i guess i should have just read more huh?
I'm sorry, are you Executives at this Construction Company?? - Paulcait1dReplied to Milk_Hunter
I mean her face looks beatiful, but i just can't get over that bulbous head. It makes her look uncanny valley to me.
My eyes widened as I stared at her, the light shining just behind her making it look as though she had a halo. - Paulcait1dReplied to HeroheroApart from that, I have also implemented some improvements to GIFfany's body, such as giving her super strength and super resistance by making her muscles and bones incredibly dense.
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I like the story. I would like to have a hint on if the system is going to be explained in the future. I have this idea in my head and it would tie up the story and the fact that the system is basically helping this pokemon world.
By the way, don't forget to comment your thoughts opinions and whatever else you want. Don't have to be nice, say things you don't like and things you do. It's quite difficult writing a Pokemon fic, there's a lot you have to think about otherwise it just blows by fast! And yeah, yeah, I know about the slightly underdeveloped characters... I'm gonna write them out more carefully in the future and try to make them more REAL in a sense... - Paulcait1dCommented
Author, you just don't want come up with other tests uh?
Ace looked helpless and Bruno thought about it, "But if you really want to participate… There's really only one real test. You get graded on how well you can guide a challenger, so as long as you're there for that test then you'll be fine." Ace nodded and they left, going to the restaurant Bruno knew about. - Paulcait1dCommented
i also tried that but then i searched it on the internet and i was bummed.
You know, Ace caught all 28 Unknowns in the games. He thought they'd unlock a super secret but… It was nothing in the end… - Paulcait1dCommented
Mayhaps becoming king of the pirates.
Well, let's keep that a secret for now… - Paulcait1dCommented
It would also need some new blood vessels and organs. Otherwise how would you feed those new bones and muscles. And especially the new super blood created by her bones.
Apart from that, I have also implemented some improvements to GIFfany's body, such as giving her super strength and super resistance by making her muscles and bones incredibly dense. - Paulcait2dCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2
- Paulcait2dCommentedI laughed, the sound echoing off the high ceilings. "Well, consider me thoroughly motivated."
- Paulcait3dReplied to Herohero
I mean, i don't dislike the slice of life either personally. But,i prefer my slice of life if the mc is going through some character development or has some progress with the romance. It would have been cool if Stan lectured Dipper on not paying attention to his sister during her birthday (i think it's a party for her birthday, not sure, correct me if i am wrong).
Ch 19 Chapter 19: End of the Party - Paulcait3dCommented
Honestly I would make a ward that teleports them into a dimension filled with tentacle monsters.
A/N: Powerful people have no need for such trivial things as knocking or not teleporting into people's houses. And everybody knows that it is mandatory for a magical girl to make a surprise entrance. - Paulcait3dReplied to XaviValentineCh 21 Aftermath
- Paulcait3dReplied to XaviValentine
got it thanks
"Seya Sugimoto. Third year, business course. I've been wanting to meet you, Midoriya." Her smile was disarming, but there was a calculating edge to it. - Paulcait3dReplied to BookDevourer87
It's not he is manipulating her
"You bonded with me after my surgery." She said in realization. - Paulcait3dReplied to Paulcait
You should notice by the fact that he said that he would "allow" her to have his children.
"So, this stuff works in a bit of a complicated way. Ultimately, it has to do with how 'deeply' I'm bonded with you." Seeing Nat's confused expression, he continued, "For example, what I have with you is what I call a Level 2 bond. To an extent, it's to an extent a superficial bond. If I go 'deeper', I will be forming a more intertwined bond with specifically your skin. This constitutes a Level 3 bond. As I go further and bond in an intimate manner with more of your body, I will eventually form a deeper bond with your womb or uterus. That's gonna be at the Level 6 bond if you're curious. That's when I'll be able to heal your uterus and allow you to have my children."