writing quality and world background carry this story, typical female slave/servant in the first 6 chapters who hes sharing his cultivation stuff with doesn't give me a good feeling for this story, usually cultivation fanfics are really interesting but when you start simping/sharing your power with other people without equal benefits its not worth it. Stop handing out freebies to people who don't even deserve them, the servants character isn't even that likeable.

I smell heresy, the description is already already enough evidence of warp corruption. exterminatus it is then.

i ussually dont like cultivation but it being ised in 40k setting is intreging. I cant wait to see what the author does. the autho makes the mc start from the trenches a hive cities under city. he doesnt brute forces it he actually thinks it out. and how the mc is growing in strength is awesome and very balanced so far. i just hope the author doeant make him op to easlily.

cultivation is literally the worst thing you could have chosen as a cheat. not because it isn't strong but because it feals cheap. the only thing people ever change about cultivation in novels is the names of realms and cultivation methods, the energy being cultivated and what makes the mc's cultivation different from other cultivators. and so far yours isnt much different. now im not saying that its bad because i dont like cultivation, that would stupid of me. all im saying is you should maybe try and stand out a bit in that aspect, for example you kinda fallowed the Chinese naming thing where they give stuff long and cringy name, (or aleast i thought it was cringy lol) and honestly i just dont thing cultivation fits very well in 40k, but i really do think you can make it work so ill keep reading and hope this turns out to be just as good as your other works.

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amazing story of high quality like all of the author's other stories. great read so far with nice plot and story. only reason it ain't 5 stars is cause it was just started and not much has been made.

MC: "Is this supposed to be my isekai cheat?" gay story.... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... .... ....

This story should be called darkness within darkness. After all, we are going from the horrors of the chaos gods to the terrors of "young master", "you dare!?" and "you are courting death!" being said said every chapter. Truly a fate worse than being corrupted by the inmaterium. After the creation of the sect everything went astray. A though it was going to get a modern twist to make it more interesting but that was not the case. If you have read any other cultivation novel then that is basically it. Nonetheless, the first few chapters are okay.

I enjoy reading this, wish there was more updates and world building.