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Babysitter564
Babysitter564Lv45mth
2024-07-11 06:21

I don’t like it that the MC shears his cheat but it’s really good to have a novel wher the MC is not the loner. The other thing that I like is that the story follows the arcs like in the main story(till now) but almost completely different but it’s there isn’t that depth element in the story and it’s most of the time foreseeable. Never the less I’m still hooked. If you are a OP fan, then I’m definitely recommending this. 🤓🤓🤓

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IMDOOMED
IMDOOMEDLv14

He's not OP, just strong, i don't like Overpower mc at all and i liked this work that's mean everything, overpower is something else, nothing close to that lol

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