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Elmarc_Yarka
Elmarc_YarkaLv132yr
2022-11-23 09:19

Pros: - Solid Grammar, not the best, but it's certainly better off than most other fanfic in this site - The author has solid knowledge on Martial Arts, so the story at least doesn't sound like nonsense - Cute little sister - The mc is not an edgy, power hungry psychopath who killes every single creatures he comes across, so that's a big plus sign. - Cool fight scenes Cons: - Irregular Updates - Romance/Harem. From a pairing where it has potential to be a wholesome and cute relationship between the MC and the FL, turns into nothing but pure fanservice. Which I guess makes sense, considering the taste of the large majority of the audience in this site, but it just kicks down my whole enthusiasm for this fic. Just my owm personal opinion tho, you could check it out if you want to.

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Astralek
AstralekLv2

Why is the cute little sister a pro?

Elmarc_Yarka
Elmarc_YarkaLv13

Bruh, don't be a freak.

Astralek:Why is the cute little sister a pro?
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Astralek
AstralekLv2

Don't be turning it on me! You nasty.

Elmarc_Yarka:Bruh, don't be a freak.
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