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Johnathon_Magus
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2022-07-25 14:06

Awesome story hoping more anime’s,manga,manwha to be incorpated by the author I sent him a list dont know he saw it might have to resend it. Overall grammer could be improved by using grammerly or getting an editor. Other than grammer this is a fighting story things will get more than bloody people will die. Mc will be fighting cold blooded killers and sadists. So yeah people will die should lead to character development for Mc. Then MC will be facing the prospect of killing oppents. Escpeially if more hardcore fighting anime,manuwha,manga is inculeded. Baki and kengan eat the weak alive and those that show mercy suffer the consquences. If author is a true fan of Baki and kengan he should be well aware of this. Even the Mc’s of the anime relized this when they put someone down they stayed down. Not killing but brutizling monsters they didnt hesitate. Im all for developing the MC as long as he learns willing to do what it takes to protect his friends and family. This mean doesnt have to mean turing cold blooded but being resloved to confront the life death situations with everything he’s got. Otherwise he’ll suffer in more ways than one. Which happens as his naivety and omptissm he grows up from and becomes the king of fighters.

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TheJiujitsuGuy
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Don't worry about the development of Mc, I am a fan of those wonderful works like Baki and Kengan, and I know what the protagonist will need to deal with. Keep supporting me and I am sure you will enjoy the direction this story takes.

Johnathon_Magus
Johnathon_MagusLv3

Author you have delivered everything you promised and then some! This is a fantastic story keep it up your doing great! The sky the limit to the stories and characters that can be added. Hopefully cough after the tournament arc MC can relax and teach in a certain school. Cough “Girls of the Wild!” and any other female martial artist from other manga, anime, and manwha. Need suggestions always here to help my friend. Have a splendid day!

TheJiujitsuGuy:Don't worry about the development of Mc, I am a fan of those wonderful works like Baki and Kengan, and I know what the protagonist will need to deal with. Keep supporting me and I am sure you will enjoy the direction this story takes.
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