Story was okay until it became absolute garbage once the MC meets the strawhats. Everything was so forced and now his “future” plans are extremely idiotic lol Do not waste your time on this fic.
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LIKEJust skip the first 12 chapters because they are pointless lol story is trash but if you want to still read it then don’t until the strawhats meet Enel.
I heavily disagree with this review, The interaction with the strawhats did seem a little forced but were still within the realm of possibility, it did not ruin anything as stated by your review, His plans for the future also makes perfect sense He wants to temporarily join the marines for armament haki and the six power and there is nothing wrong with it, Honestly your review is completely misleading.
He wanted to join CP0 not the navy and the point of haki is by fighting and he already knows the basics by the show/manga so what is the point of joining any organization? There isn’t any. He has a better chance so just go out in the world and find people to fight because he can always escape. And the fact that he wanted to join CP0 was idiotic and just made no sense. And he just started to make plans after so all that time…. Story becake awful then lol maybe if I restarted the fic at the strawhat meeting then sure I might like it but the entire 12 chapters before it were pointless and made the MC look like a complete moron. You don’t need a teacher for haki.
leo26:I heavily disagree with this review, The interaction with the strawhats did seem a little forced but were still within the realm of possibility, it did not ruin anything as stated by your review, His plans for the future also makes perfect sense He wants to temporarily join the marines for armament haki and the six power and there is nothing wrong with it, Honestly your review is completely misleading.
Ah yes you don't need a teacher for haki because every1 automatically knows how to use haki, it's not like zoro and luffy needed some1 else help to get it.
DaoistyQNGiX:He wanted to join CP0 not the navy and the point of haki is by fighting and he already knows the basics by the show/manga so what is the point of joining any organization? There isn’t any. He has a better chance so just go out in the world and find people to fight because he can always escape. And the fact that he wanted to join CP0 was idiotic and just made no sense. And he just started to make plans after so all that time…. Story becake awful then lol maybe if I restarted the fic at the strawhat meeting then sure I might like it but the entire 12 chapters before it were pointless and made the MC look like a complete moron. You don’t need a teacher for haki.
Dude..you are right. Haki is a free thing..who needs a teacher? Almost everyone in One Piece knows it. Haha
leo26:Ah yes you don't need a teacher for haki because every1 automatically knows how to use haki, it's not like zoro and luffy needed some1 else help to get it.
Of course, if friend, everyone in One Piece knows how to use the haki.
DaoistyQNGiX:He wanted to join CP0 not the navy and the point of haki is by fighting and he already knows the basics by the show/manga so what is the point of joining any organization? There isn’t any. He has a better chance so just go out in the world and find people to fight because he can always escape. And the fact that he wanted to join CP0 was idiotic and just made no sense. And he just started to make plans after so all that time…. Story becake awful then lol maybe if I restarted the fic at the strawhat meeting then sure I might like it but the entire 12 chapters before it were pointless and made the MC look like a complete moron. You don’t need a teacher for haki.
Knows Haki, BUT doesn't have it
Jorlat123:Dude..you are right. Haki is a free thing..who needs a teacher? Almost everyone in One Piece knows it. Haha
Yes yes so much that Luffy needed a teacher honestly what you said is really stupid
Jorlat123:Dude..you are right. Haki is a free thing..who needs a teacher? Almost everyone in One Piece knows it. Haha
LOL. Someone doesn't get the sarcasm huh. SMH
TheNight_Wyvern:Yes yes so much that Luffy needed a teacher honestly what you said is really stupid
I don't think having of the manga or anime will give you an advantage at haki. It's the same as having knowledge about karate and so on, you won't become a master by just having seen it. Joining the CP0 makes sense since they should have competent teachers regarding haki and that other stuff.
DaoistyQNGiX:He wanted to join CP0 not the navy and the point of haki is by fighting and he already knows the basics by the show/manga so what is the point of joining any organization? There isn’t any. He has a better chance so just go out in the world and find people to fight because he can always escape. And the fact that he wanted to join CP0 was idiotic and just made no sense. And he just started to make plans after so all that time…. Story becake awful then lol maybe if I restarted the fic at the strawhat meeting then sure I might like it but the entire 12 chapters before it were pointless and made the MC look like a complete moron. You don’t need a teacher for haki.
Te das cuenta que los usuarios de haki son personas con talento en el, y que no todos lo pueden usar, aparte que cada personaje tuvo algun tipo de maestro desde instructores en la marina a piratas enseñando a novatos. Creo que la excepción es Doflamingo usando el haki del Rey y talvez Kaido por ser de una raza diferente :v
DaoistyQNGiX:He wanted to join CP0 not the navy and the point of haki is by fighting and he already knows the basics by the show/manga so what is the point of joining any organization? There isn’t any. He has a better chance so just go out in the world and find people to fight because he can always escape. And the fact that he wanted to join CP0 was idiotic and just made no sense. And he just started to make plans after so all that time…. Story becake awful then lol maybe if I restarted the fic at the strawhat meeting then sure I might like it but the entire 12 chapters before it were pointless and made the MC look like a complete moron. You don’t need a teacher for haki.
...wow that logic means I can learn how to make spacecraft by just watching sci-fi stuff
DaoistyQNGiX:He wanted to join CP0 not the navy and the point of haki is by fighting and he already knows the basics by the show/manga so what is the point of joining any organization? There isn’t any. He has a better chance so just go out in the world and find people to fight because he can always escape. And the fact that he wanted to join CP0 was idiotic and just made no sense. And he just started to make plans after so all that time…. Story becake awful then lol maybe if I restarted the fic at the strawhat meeting then sure I might like it but the entire 12 chapters before it were pointless and made the MC look like a complete moron. You don’t need a teacher for haki.
Chapter 14
Everyone can learn haki if they keep on fighting haki users by breaking their limits. Having basic haki dosnt mean your stronger than those without it, some people physical strength are stronger so they can fight basic haki users and learn it by themself. Rayleigh only made Luffy learn haki faster by telling him about haki while luffy had to do all the work and he only taught him mostly about observation haki by blindfold hitting him and armanent haki was learn all by himself cause it cant be taught only the knowledge of armanent haki existence helped him learn faster which was getting beaten physically in alot of life and death battle which is why Rayleigh only watched over Luffy for a year. Before Luffy training (timeskip 2 years) Rayleigh scanned the island saying theres more than 500 monsters whom luffy cant beat (in cannon) that explain it clearly that he wanted Luffy to have Life and death battle and that it cant be taught directly only observation haki can be taught which im sure sky people excel at it cus even a kid can use mantra/haki in cannon
leo26:Ah yes you don't need a teacher for haki because every1 automatically knows how to use haki, it's not like zoro and luffy needed some1 else help to get it.
Could you elaborate on what happens, please?
no theres praticaly no details that is not writen in the manga or anime, be it one piece hunterxhunter or cultivation novels theres no details that you need a teacher for is all simply stuff with nothing further behind it, and if you forgot he already knows up to date content of luffy vs kaido 1000+ chapter
leo26:Ah yes you don't need a teacher for haki because every1 automatically knows how to use haki, it's not like zoro and luffy needed some1 else help to get it.
no most people in one piece world never heard of it only some knows and less can use
JojoVanish:Of course, if friend, everyone in One Piece knows how to use the haki.
You would only need a teacher if you don't know about it, Luffy had zero info on haki, so of course rayleigh had to teach him, anyone that has watch the anime or read the manger knows the basics and can go from there, or did you think the first person to use haki had a teacher? Use you're brains lol.
Point, rokushiki and haki are very simple in concept, they just require insane amount of training to learn.
GrimReeFer:You would only need a teacher if you don't know about it, Luffy had zero info on haki, so of course rayleigh had to teach him, anyone that has watch the anime or read the manger knows the basics and can go from there, or did you think the first person to use haki had a teacher? Use you're brains lol.
idk, man. Seemed pretty tone deaf and unclear to me. Expecially the last sentence.
Jorlat123:LOL. Someone doesn't get the sarcasm huh. SMH
