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Aditya_0814
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2023-06-13 19:11

pros( for me ).~ chapters are short ~ magic is better discussed ~it manage to pull something beyond my prediction ~world background and story development is good.cons( for me)~ relationships are too realistic and i don't like realistic love, ana claim she love jarad but still kissed other guy. i was hoping she won't end up with him and thankfully it didn't .~ characters are somewhat poorly written ~power scaling is too bad.

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Magecrafter
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Thanks for reading. I honestly appreciate this a lot.

Josh_3924
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What do you mean? Is there ntr?

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