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what the hell happened to the mature MC we saw earlier? he's now a cocky brat that is butthurt by random things. he dealt with crabbe and goyle at the park just fine. basically ignored them, now one criticism from snape and they are life long enemies and one rejection from lupin and he's judging the guy and confidently just saying he will accept next time without any consideration for another person? I could understand if this was after he knew Sirius for a while as if his emotional maturity rubbed off on him and something wakes him to that character flaw but instead he is now just all of a sudden a dick
I mean they were self absorbed but I think they seemed pretty kind hearted and well intentioned. they were worried the kid was dead injured or permanently affected. they did check all of that first as well before worrying about what others will think. it's also one of those things where people will just worry it's not like you can do anything about it.
i mean Bruce would make sense. if he wanted to focus on capturing phantom he is basically paying 30 million to calm down the underworld on the day they will fight... it makes less sense for dean to do it especially since it requires some real niche knowledge on batman which I don't think he was supposed to have
not literally anything... they are literally crimes... wtf are you talking about? and yeah some don't care about prison but like of course some don't some people don't care about living so it's hard to find a good punishment for everyone. people really have convinced themselves that crimes are somehow easy to do or unreasonable...
why add this as an author? you have literally taken the one interesting thing away from your character which is his unique powers to delve into a completely separate and annoying tangent. he could instead be learning to use his takeover magic without being taken over or he could be learning to do it faster or something. that would allow the readers to experience what they wish and would not just be filler that is intended to make the character look well rounded even though you theoretically did that already by saying he trained on everything but takeover with ur... its a literal start over from the beginning of the story...
look author iIam trying to stand up for you on changing the way the beasts work as I think it is interesting but this he has trained for months but all of a sudden is starting again is literally stupid. further, it's not really training without magic if he uses magic to strengthen himself...
personally I don't mind the change to making them a take over form and not a battery. makes them much easier to limit for growth purposes and is more interesting. further it fits much better into the world. granted I agree that he should keep the ability to use a limited version of all their powers without their forms.
although it does depend on what you mean by resolve. I bet you there are millions of people who don't commit a crime because they might go to prison... resolved
and to separate which is the second part of my description. keep dangerous people away from general population.
ok? what's your point? it's not meant to resolve it's meant to scare and deter... literally what I was saying... people are so butt hurt about prison like it isn't something that can be pretty easily avoided.