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Hello Author, I don’t plan on reading your novel but I’m here to give you a tip: Fix your synopsis, it’s the first contact most ppl have with your work, it shouldn’t have typos and it should flow easily, takes literally 5min to create a free account on chat gpt paste your already existing text there and ask the IA to fix your language mistakes. Ps: do delete this after reading it, tyvm and goodluck

Was fine until the premium chapters started, first big conflict of the novel, could've been solved in 10-20 different ways (vampire saves him, he gets new powers with his system, etc...), instead when he's about to die his system enters what I like to call a "MCs are immortal as long as plot armour exists mode" and gives him a temporary powerup to kill the enemies and win the fight, in my opinion that's a solution for a lazy writter, one who doesn't bother to think about the direction of his novel and only wants to write a basic novel to get some money. (not saying it's the case, but that's usually the case for most harem writters) Anyway, I didn't like the way he solved the conflict, therefore i'm dropping the novel :P

If we think about this, Alec said that if it weren't for Lathel being there he wouldn't be able to attack that globin cave, so technically nothing in there is his loot/opportunity, but sure..

Always a dumb idea

So, he posted an item for auction and increased the price by bidding in his own item... Sure.

The edgelord mentality is fun for awhile, but after 30 ch it starts to get boring :/

Reminds me a lot of High School of the Dead, but then again it might just be because it involves zombies and a high scool…

I mean, dude just ordered every1 to fall back so his 7 tier 0 golems can hold an entire army of zombies back :/.

CHARGE! procceds to defend a wall :P

Dude had a 14 day headstart and used it doing the same things he was ised to doing in his old world, talk about being stupid, am I right?