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TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv132yr
2022-05-25 15:25

Its not bad but the MC has no goal or drive in life whatsoever. He wants to find a way to die or whatever but like its so boring reading about someone who doesnt want to better themselves. He knows about the world destroying powers that exist in his backyard and never attempts to train or become stronger or find other ways to use his power. He is also brain dead so that doesnt help. Every chapter i read is only me hoping that sonething will redeem the MC and make this worth while, but so far nothing had happened.

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VQuintessence
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I don't think you paid that much attention when reading. Perhaps the novel is not to your liking, and that's okay. The mc has goals, the most important of which is understanding himself. He stated it many times, but he hopes he can finally understand what he is, and where did his powers come from? How did he find himself in DC? In fact, he's glad he's in DC because only such a world has the possibility of giving him answers. This is all he wants, answers, and his plans and actions are already leading towards gaining those answers. I'm not sure what you mean by brain dead? I think numb to emotions perhaps? Even though his power made him that way to a certain extent, I'd say his personality is still vibrant. He's more like a free soul, not interested in any rules bounding him down, just like death can not bound him, see a connection here? He's sometimes cheerful, and other times calm. He has a hobby of collecting things, to make his numb emotions move a bit, and have some fun. He does better himself because he learns and thinks. He stressed many times and even belittled himself, saying that he is not smart just to make himself think more. He's also becoming stronger, starting with something you might have ignored. He just hired Richard Dragon to teach him, someone who taught Batman. So he's trying to be stronger, but it's taking time. Again, as I said first, I don't think this novel is for you because you ignored a lot of things, and didn't think much about it. That's okay, so I hope you find something to your liking [img=recommend]

PHOENIX_EMPRESS
PHOENIX_EMPRESSLv3

when a completely irrelevant review, I really want to deny it, fortunately, the author made me not have to do it, but, I still want to comment starting from the second paragraph where you draw the conclusion that "mc doesn't use any other way to use his power"

VQuintessence:I don't think you paid that much attention when reading. Perhaps the novel is not to your liking, and that's okay. The mc has goals, the most important of which is understanding himself. He stated it many times, but he hopes he can finally understand what he is, and where did his powers come from? How did he find himself in DC? In fact, he's glad he's in DC because only such a world has the possibility of giving him answers. This is all he wants, answers, and his plans and actions are already leading towards gaining those answers. I'm not sure what you mean by brain dead? I think numb to emotions perhaps? Even though his power made him that way to a certain extent, I'd say his personality is still vibrant. He's more like a free soul, not interested in any rules bounding him down, just like death can not bound him, see a connection here? He's sometimes cheerful, and other times calm. He has a hobby of collecting things, to make his numb emotions move a bit, and have some fun. He does better himself because he learns and thinks. He stressed many times and even belittled himself, saying that he is not smart just to make himself think more. He's also becoming stronger, starting with something you might have ignored. He just hired Richard Dragon to teach him, someone who taught Batman. So he's trying to be stronger, but it's taking time. Again, as I said first, I don't think this novel is for you because you ignored a lot of things, and didn't think much about it. That's okay, so I hope you find something to your liking [img=recommend]
PHOENIX_EMPRESS
PHOENIX_EMPRESSLv3

in the chapters i've read, i've seen that mc actually uses his powers to the fullest with the author emphasizing him many times with sentences like "he will do something very risky so his chances of success are higher" something like that where his strength will be works more perfectly when the threat of death comes to him, so, where do you draw the conclusion that "mc doesn't find any other way to use his powers" kstic what I see in the chapters that come is mc is getting better in terms of strength and his fighting style is getting better and better. advanced by using strength in the fight against Deathstroke

TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

1. I am on chapter 66, that means it took 60+ chapters for the MC to better himself (attempt to) by learning how to fight. So, my point still stands. 2. The MCs main ability is not dying, so him making risky plans so they are successful isnt using his power in a new way, when he does it from the very first chapter and continues to do so. Its all he did. HENCE my review stating he never attempted to change or learn to use his power. These statements were true at the time of me making my review. Its great that the author is now having the MC learn to fight, Im all for it and completely support it, but I also stand behind my previous statements.

PHOENIX_EMPRESS:in the chapters i've read, i've seen that mc actually uses his powers to the fullest with the author emphasizing him many times with sentences like "he will do something very risky so his chances of success are higher" something like that where his strength will be works more perfectly when the threat of death comes to him, so, where do you draw the conclusion that "mc doesn't find any other way to use his powers" kstic what I see in the chapters that come is mc is getting better in terms of strength and his fighting style is getting better and better. advanced by using strength in the fight against Deathstroke
Lazyy
LazyyLv12

it takes the MC 60 CHAPTERS to start learning how to fight? Jesus Christ, that's a long while.

TreacherousVoid:1. I am on chapter 66, that means it took 60+ chapters for the MC to better himself (attempt to) by learning how to fight. So, my point still stands. 2. The MCs main ability is not dying, so him making risky plans so they are successful isnt using his power in a new way, when he does it from the very first chapter and continues to do so. Its all he did. HENCE my review stating he never attempted to change or learn to use his power. These statements were true at the time of me making my review. Its great that the author is now having the MC learn to fight, Im all for it and completely support it, but I also stand behind my previous statements.
TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

Yep. And even then, we hardly see him fight. He basically only schemes, and plans things. Doesnt get down and dirty, which is a disappointment to me.

Lazyy:it takes the MC 60 CHAPTERS to start learning how to fight? Jesus Christ, that's a long while.
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GawkGawk
GawkGawkLv3

Are they good schemes at least?

TreacherousVoid:Yep. And even then, we hardly see him fight. He basically only schemes, and plans things. Doesnt get down and dirty, which is a disappointment to me.
TreacherousVoid
TreacherousVoidLv13

I guess 🤷🏾‍♂️ all of them involve attacking from a distance. Or tricking the enemy into a trap or some sheet lol

GawkGawk:Are they good schemes at least?
Drurlulu
DrurluluLv13

I have to disagree with you when you said that the MC have no goal after reading the novel

TreacherousVoid:I guess 🤷🏾‍♂️ all of them involve attacking from a distance. Or tricking the enemy into a trap or some sheet lol
Drurlulu
DrurluluLv13

and I don't know what chapter it is when he made the staff of all things but that is his weapon and where he stores all sorts of abilities like kryptonite and divinity, if not for it it would have taken a much longer time to get all the powers he possessed in the end chapter

TreacherousVoid:1. I am on chapter 66, that means it took 60+ chapters for the MC to better himself (attempt to) by learning how to fight. So, my point still stands. 2. The MCs main ability is not dying, so him making risky plans so they are successful isnt using his power in a new way, when he does it from the very first chapter and continues to do so. Its all he did. HENCE my review stating he never attempted to change or learn to use his power. These statements were true at the time of me making my review. Its great that the author is now having the MC learn to fight, Im all for it and completely support it, but I also stand behind my previous statements.
Lc_The_Second
Lc_The_SecondLv4

Nah... By the looks of it. Looks lime MC has deadpool powers without being deadpool. So looks boring. I can't even try.

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