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Master_DaoLv41yr
2023-10-28 16:13

It's a novel to read only if you really can't find other novels to pass the time. This is the third time that my review has been deleted despite having given a 4 star rating, i will repost my review as many times as necessary because i don't like it when the author deletes reviews that he don't like and leaves what he wants. It's a novel to be considered as a H*ntai or dirty novel, the novel is filled with 95% of Yuri relationships, so you don't need to get attached to any character, we have an MC who is reincarnated in a fantasy world with an ultra powerful mother, but there is nothing unique for this MC, even his talent, genius, training, technique, others have the same, even the system ( another reincarnated character have a system since the beginning of the novel and the MC does acquire the system around chapter 520 which is absolutely useless ) and even when the author has finally done something worthy of an MC and his talent since he skipped the Rank of cultivation from Half-Saint to Saint directly, we get a BS that the MC can no longer cultivate for 100 years because his body does not support the progression, so everyone catches up easily after 100 years and still loses something unique, if you really want to consider an MC for this novel it's his mother, she's a person who does what she wants when she wants and very powerful from the start being at Legendary rank ( A true God ), if she wants, she f**ks with her son or her daughter or both together, if her children are not there, she f**ks with her close friends (she no longer does so since she f**ked with her children) or with her maids, and in the last chapters around 684, she progresses towards a level never seen before ( Infinity Rank, to put it simply, at this rank you can do anything, you are omnipotent and omnipresent at this rank), which is impossible for the real MC of this novel to complete even if we give him billions of years or more, so you can simply consider her as the Female MC in the novel revolves around her ( I doubt she even loves him in a romantic way, but she loves him because he is her child and wants to pamper him, because he has absolutely no way of dominating his mother with his character and his strength if he was not her child ). The only thing that can make you read this novel is S*ut and lemons, but even that is messed up with 95% of Yuri in all relationships, but there are always readers excited for scenes like that and that's it. This is why i ask the new reader to consider it as a dirty novel or H*ntai if you want and to skip chapters in my opinion ( the MC has a Harem of wives, lovers and maids, with Yuri relationships served as milk to a child ) Of course, this is just my personal opinion, but you can read the novel or other reviews from other readers to get an idea.

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Master_DaoLv4

You know, i gave a 4 star because I don't like to give harsh ratings so as not to demotivate the author but what i hate the most is when the author deletes a review for no reason just because the author doesn't like ( I would understand if i had written a review to insult him, but you can read my review and you will understand that i have never disrespected and i even said that it is my personal opinion and that you will have to read the novel or see the other reviews so as not to be biased ). Regarding the author who mentioned that if we remove an MC from the novel and the story continues without any impact, i must say that he is a great author and that i completely agree with him. And for the question of the real Main Character i believe that it is an FMC novel and the last vote confirmed it since Lilith managed to reach the semi-finals for FL, while the real MC did not even have an appearance in the ML survey at the beginning which is ironic given that Lith according to the novel and the author is the real MC. Have a nice day.

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Master_DaoLv4

And one last point, i have the right to give my review since i use my Fast Pass to unlock the chapters.

Dark_Crow_DaoLv14

I agree with what you said, each person has the right to give their opinion and make a review while remaining respectful, and from what i read, you did not say anything bad or disrespect the author to justify the deletion of your review.

Master_SpearLv4

Thanks for the review

RagingMutantLv15

Yeah I wish it showed he had an opportunity to be stronger than her. At this point he could only be on par with her since true infinity realm causes them to be omnipresent so he would be able to be with his wives. At the beginning I feel like I remeber him saying son bs about wanting to be stronger than her so he could protect her…how is he going to be stronger than someone that could solo the verse…

Sword_Master_DaoLv4

Thanks bro

DaoistArboreLv14

Well, part of the reason your comments should be deleted is because you rant on and on about yuri. It happens early on and it is well established that the women in this novel are realistic in the sense that they don’t lay like plastic dolls when there are multiple women in the room as partners The rest of your comment can be taken as reasonable, lots of odd things happen to say the least, but also, WebNovel will shadow ban comments if they have flagged words as well

Z3rkers_ELv3

Thanks man you save me alot of time

Z0d_Lv4

Appreciate you for saving my time. Hate when authors don’t include yuri as a tag. It absolutely is NTR.

DaoistArboreLv14

These reviews are being removed because they’re wrong, nothing more and nothing less

DaoistArboreLv14

No it isn’t, go look up a dictionary zzz Just say that you don’t like women breathing near each other so authors know to block your comments

Z0d_:Appreciate you for saving my time. Hate when authors don’t include yuri as a tag. It absolutely is NTR.
Master_DaoLv4

Okay Mr i know everything, you're the only one who understands and I'm just lying, oh you're incredible wow 🤦🏻‍♂️, I repeat one last time, i have the right to give my opinion as i see fit as long as i do not disrespect the readers or the author or i gives false information. PS: I came to see your comments in your profile, it's good to be faithful to your tastes, but your comments are mostly on the side of the novel and the author that i really have a doubt about your account...👀👀 To Good Listener.

DaoistArbore:These reviews are being removed because they’re wrong, nothing more and nothing less
syanLv14

i’ve only read to chapter 70 ish but is there really that much more yuri? is bro a cuck😭? i’m already bored please lemme know🙏

Master_DaoLv4

There are too many YURI, i don't remember exactly how many, but what i do remember is that there are YURI when he is not present and also when he is present.

syan:i’ve only read to chapter 70 ish but is there really that much more yuri? is bro a cuck😭? i’m already bored please lemme know🙏
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Echelon_5Lv15

Around chp 127. Honestly it started really well and I liked the family stuff, the emotions seem real and thoughtful and the chapters are interesting..... however this takes a major nose-dive in the second volume. it just becomes sooo boring and monotonous, lith literally does nothing for the majority of the time and anything mildly interesting happens to other characters but you dont really care or have any emotional attachment to these people as most are just character traits embodied fully and silly. I understand it's a slice of life and that's fine, but it's a boring slice of life, it's literally saying the actions hes going through beat for beat and that too would be fine but he doesnt ever really do anything interesting it's just going to class, drinking tea and sleeping. even during the capture the flag nothing particularly noteworthy happened. the only characters he interacts with in the academy are his 2 male roommates and flamboyant teacher with no redeemable values who apparently is gonna be apart of the harem (bleghh). oh and another thing is this is a harem slice of life novel during an academy arc and not one female student has been introduced, no shenanigans, nobody that provides some interactions, be it flirting or whatnot, for the mc. yaya I get it your trying 'different' and not have all female characters falling over the mc drooling but to reduce that number to 0 just makes it boring when your trying to be different and 'mature', theres a reason people flock to things like that. all in all good start but dropped off considerably, part of me wants to keep reading to see if it gets good again but I just dont care about reading from so many other ppls perspective when the mc is relegated to being boring and mature with nothing note worthy to do

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