webnovel
Gavin_APYT
Gavin_APYTLv21yr
2023-01-09 03:20

A little bit of yuri is fine, but holy heck is this excessive. MC is basically a 3rd wheel in this story and not really about him at all. Always feels like the girls completely just forget about him and he gets almost no character development. His entire 19 years of life on earth was thrown out the window wayyyy to easily. Sure I get he can grow out of it but in like 3 months?!? This story would be 1000% better if you only just turned the yuri down and it’s not always behind the MCs back (which does feel like he’s almost getting cheated on).

Liked by 20 people

LIKE
Replies8
Gavin_APYT
Gavin_APYTLv2

Also in a world where people are just killed in the streets for minor conflic and he doesn’t kill at all, he’s a adult mentally but acts like a complete child, author you started out so strong but you have lost you way. You found the rabbit hole and fell right into it, and you haven’t stopped falling since .

Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13

Soo MC is A Cuck!

Gavin_APYT
Gavin_APYTLv2

Not complete as they all still love him but it feels borderline.

Jheydi327:Soo MC is A Cuck!
Jheydi327
Jheydi327Lv13

What do you .Ean borderline ?

Gavin_APYT:Not complete as they all still love him but it feels borderline.
Gavin_APYT
Gavin_APYTLv2

Like some of the girls love each other as well, doing stuff behind his back. If it wasn’t for the fact that they love him it would be cheating, so borderline

Jheydi327:What do you .Ean borderline ?
DaoistArbore
DaoistArboreLv13

This comment is just incorrect and it’s crazy, but what can I expect from people that agree with the “yuri is NTR” crowd

Gavin_APYT
Gavin_APYTLv2

Not completely against yuri, but the story stops being about him. He’s the main character, it’s supposed to be about him. But now he is just a side character. The yuri is excessive putting it mildly , and his character development is horrible, don’t know what else to tell you.

DaoistArbore:This comment is just incorrect and it’s crazy, but what can I expect from people that agree with the “yuri is NTR” crowd
michele_00
michele_00Lv2

DaoistArbore:This comment is just incorrect and it’s crazy, but what can I expect from people that agree with the “yuri is NTR” crowd
Other Reviews
Echelon_5
Echelon_5Lv15

Around chp 127. Honestly it started really well and I liked the family stuff, the emotions seem real and thoughtful and the chapters are interesting..... however this takes a major nose-dive in the second volume. it just becomes sooo boring and monotonous, lith literally does nothing for the majority of the time and anything mildly interesting happens to other characters but you dont really care or have any emotional attachment to these people as most are just character traits embodied fully and silly. I understand it's a slice of life and that's fine, but it's a boring slice of life, it's literally saying the actions hes going through beat for beat and that too would be fine but he doesnt ever really do anything interesting it's just going to class, drinking tea and sleeping. even during the capture the flag nothing particularly noteworthy happened. the only characters he interacts with in the academy are his 2 male roommates and flamboyant teacher with no redeemable values who apparently is gonna be apart of the harem (bleghh). oh and another thing is this is a harem slice of life novel during an academy arc and not one female student has been introduced, no shenanigans, nobody that provides some interactions, be it flirting or whatnot, for the mc. yaya I get it your trying 'different' and not have all female characters falling over the mc drooling but to reduce that number to 0 just makes it boring when your trying to be different and 'mature', theres a reason people flock to things like that. all in all good start but dropped off considerably, part of me wants to keep reading to see if it gets good again but I just dont care about reading from so many other ppls perspective when the mc is relegated to being boring and mature with nothing note worthy to do

Nvmdraxx
NvmdraxxLv4
Related Stories

The Witch Hunter System

Dual cultivation isn't a choice; it's a necessity. After being struck by a truck like most lucky protagonists (or unlucky ones), Vaan found himself transmigrated into the body of an orphan in the world of witches and demons. However, they didn't always exist. Demons terrorized the world ever since the Gehenna Realm descended over 300 years ago. but along with them, came mana, giving birth to witches to combat these demons. Since then, the world of men was dominated by witches, establishing the seven witch kingdoms, which safeguards at the forefront of the demon invasion. In order to survive in the matriarchal society of the witch kingdoms, Vaan, like all other men who cannot use magic, had to learn how to service the witches to survive. Nevertheless, it did not come without its own benefits. Years of research have led the world to the discovery of intimacy between men and women could increase the witches' mana absorption. But at the same time, men could absorb some of this mana to improve their physique and lifespan. Thus, since then, an intricate relationship was formed between men and witches in the red-light districts. Love became casual, and dual cultivation is common. As a prodigy in the art of pleasing women, Vaan lived a smooth two years since his transmigration as an orphan. However, everything came crashing down in a heartbeat one day when his life was nearly taken, and Lady Eniwse whom he served went berserk. Even so, that was not the end. With the awakening of the Witch Hunter System, watch how Vaan takes on the world and becomes the lord of witches. ===== Genre: [Mature Content] [R-18] [Smut] [Magic] [Witches] [Demons] [Spirits] [Dragons] [Beasts] [Reincarnation] [Adventure] [Action] [Mystery] [Academy] [Weak-to-Strong] [Scheming MC] [Harem] [System] [Servants] [Slaves] [Smart MC] [Alchemy] [Forging] [Misunderstandings] [Game Elements] [Kingdom-Building] [Overpowered MC] ===== Note: Contains lemons. Hunting witches does not necessarily imply killing witches, if you know what I mean ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ===== Feel free to join the discord for novel discussion or grab the novel update role to be notified as soon as new chapters are released in the link below; https://discord.gg/9SUWMPZ ===== My other novels; First novel: Prime Originator (Shared Universe) Second novel: I am a Notorious Boss in the Alternate World (Shared Universe) =====

Pointbreak · Fantasy
4.5
931 Chs

Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest

Have you ever felt like you wanted to live a new life as someone else? Have you ever desired to experience a new life without the limits that our daily lives always put us through? Have you ever had the crave for adventure and to soar across endless horizons? Brand New Life Online, a new Full Dive VRMMO promised to make all these dreams come true. Said to be a brand-new experience at life, an incredibly realistic game and acclaimed to be fantastically complex yet simplistic enough for just anybody to understand and enjoy, this virtual reality game quickly took over the entire world of video games, with new players soaring the tens of millions in its first year of launch! Elayne, a young mother, is suddenly thrown into this game because she wanted to reconnect with her daughter, but she’ll quickly find herself delving into endless conflicts, fights, action, and a world filled with history and mysteries… Will our protagonist be able to progress through these challenges all while taking care of her farm, protecting the forest, and also seeking her daughter? Who knows? Maybe she’ll even end up defeating a World Boss! Over 100000 Words available for FREE! Daily Chapters Note : Vote for the Novel for extra weekly chapters. 100 Power Stones = 1 Extra Chapter per week 200 Power Stones = 2 Extra Chapters per week 500 Power Stones = 3 Extra chapters per week 10 Golden Tickets = 1 Extra chapters per week 20 Golden Tickets = 2 Extra chapters per week 50 Golden Tickets = 3 Extra chapters per week

PancakesWitch · Fantasy
4.8
1344 Chs