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DeadSoil
DeadSoilLv132yr
2022-07-28 13:17

This novel has several problems and most of them come from the fact that the protagonist keeps the memories of the past life. after reading about 200 chapters I can say that the author has no idea what he was doing and seems to have gotten lost. the fact that the protagonist has the memories of his past life, did nothing but make him weaker mentally and a person who seems to be bound by the laws and cultures of his past life, I didn't see any benefits from having the memories of the previous life. and that only made him pathetic. all this just to spend hundreds of chapters for "evolution" of the protagonist.

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Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

So he doesn’t kill or anything?

Chris_Gill
Chris_GillLv15

it is the typical i want to make drama and problems for the MC lets bring forth the old world views... MC at birth is confident to woo his sister and mom and is secure doing it, but soon as he is about to go all the way he turns full on beta oh no i cant, i am so embarrassed etc....

Spabsta:So he doesn’t kill or anything?
Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

Ah.. one of those guys huh. Normal Japanese protagonists

Chris_Gill:it is the typical i want to make drama and problems for the MC lets bring forth the old world views... MC at birth is confident to woo his sister and mom and is secure doing it, but soon as he is about to go all the way he turns full on beta oh no i cant, i am so embarrassed etc....
B_L_A_C_K_Soul
B_L_A_C_K_SoulLv14

nope, he does. just not in the begining.

Spabsta:So he doesn’t kill or anything?
Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

I see

B_L_A_C_K_Soul:nope, he does. just not in the begining.
StaidLynx
StaidLynxLv12

mmh it feels rushed mc is developing way too fast as a babyMother of Mc already had a child(has experience in parenting)but does nothing when 2nd child(i.e.Mc) acts strange.Mother of Mc is in the God realm(i.e. she's a God) surely a God can read thoughts and see through the soul of a mortal

CapaxInfiniti
CapaxInfinitiLv11

I have many many complaints and dislikes about this novel BUT I gotta say... the author literally explained that the Mother CAN read minds and do what you said.... but chooses NOT to do so with her children. Why? Because they are her babies and she doesn't want to.

StaidLynx:mmh it feels rushed mc is developing way too fast as a babyMother of Mc already had a child(has experience in parenting)but does nothing when 2nd child(i.e.Mc) acts strange.Mother of Mc is in the God realm(i.e. she's a God) surely a God can read thoughts and see through the soul of a mortal
dragonlover89
dragonlover89Lv1

it literally tells you she can but doesn't want to

StaidLynx:mmh it feels rushed mc is developing way too fast as a babyMother of Mc already had a child(has experience in parenting)but does nothing when 2nd child(i.e.Mc) acts strange.Mother of Mc is in the God realm(i.e. she's a God) surely a God can read thoughts and see through the soul of a mortal
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Echelon_5
Echelon_5Lv15

Around chp 127. Honestly it started really well and I liked the family stuff, the emotions seem real and thoughtful and the chapters are interesting..... however this takes a major nose-dive in the second volume. it just becomes sooo boring and monotonous, lith literally does nothing for the majority of the time and anything mildly interesting happens to other characters but you dont really care or have any emotional attachment to these people as most are just character traits embodied fully and silly. I understand it's a slice of life and that's fine, but it's a boring slice of life, it's literally saying the actions hes going through beat for beat and that too would be fine but he doesnt ever really do anything interesting it's just going to class, drinking tea and sleeping. even during the capture the flag nothing particularly noteworthy happened. the only characters he interacts with in the academy are his 2 male roommates and flamboyant teacher with no redeemable values who apparently is gonna be apart of the harem (bleghh). oh and another thing is this is a harem slice of life novel during an academy arc and not one female student has been introduced, no shenanigans, nobody that provides some interactions, be it flirting or whatnot, for the mc. yaya I get it your trying 'different' and not have all female characters falling over the mc drooling but to reduce that number to 0 just makes it boring when your trying to be different and 'mature', theres a reason people flock to things like that. all in all good start but dropped off considerably, part of me wants to keep reading to see if it gets good again but I just dont care about reading from so many other ppls perspective when the mc is relegated to being boring and mature with nothing note worthy to do

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Master_Dao
Master_DaoLv4

It's a novel to read only if you really can't find other novels to pass the time. This is the third time that my review has been deleted despite having given a 4 star rating, i will repost my review as many times as necessary because i don't like it when the author deletes reviews that he don't like and leaves what he wants. It's a novel to be considered as a H*ntai or dirty novel, the novel is filled with 95% of Yuri relationships, so you don't need to get attached to any character, we have an MC who is reincarnated in a fantasy world with an ultra powerful mother, but there is nothing unique for this MC, even his talent, genius, training, technique, others have the same, even the system ( another reincarnated character have a system since the beginning of the novel and the MC does acquire the system around chapter 520 which is absolutely useless ) and even when the author has finally done something worthy of an MC and his talent since he skipped the Rank of cultivation from Half-Saint to Saint directly, we get a BS that the MC can no longer cultivate for 100 years because his body does not support the progression, so everyone catches up easily after 100 years and still loses something unique, if you really want to consider an MC for this novel it's his mother, she's a person who does what she wants when she wants and very powerful from the start being at Legendary rank ( A true God ), if she wants, she f**ks with her son or her daughter or both together, if her children are not there, she f**ks with her close friends (she no longer does so since she f**ked with her children) or with her maids, and in the last chapters around 684, she progresses towards a level never seen before ( Infinity Rank, to put it simply, at this rank you can do anything, you are omnipotent and omnipresent at this rank), which is impossible for the real MC of this novel to complete even if we give him billions of years or more, so you can simply consider her as the Female MC in the novel revolves around her ( I doubt she even loves him in a romantic way, but she loves him because he is her child and wants to pamper him, because he has absolutely no way of dominating his mother with his character and his strength if he was not her child ). The only thing that can make you read this novel is S*ut and lemons, but even that is messed up with 95% of Yuri in all relationships, but there are always readers excited for scenes like that and that's it. This is why i ask the new reader to consider it as a dirty novel or H*ntai if you want and to skip chapters in my opinion ( the MC has a Harem of wives, lovers and maids, with Yuri relationships served as milk to a child ) Of course, this is just my personal opinion, but you can read the novel or other reviews from other readers to get an idea.

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