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Mandeer2dCommentedMan the chapters are so short and it’s hard to keep interest when it takes like 3 or 4 chapters to get the ball rolling on things. Once you get caught up to the latest chapter, it really does feel like the story is moving at a snails pace. I think it would be better if you combined 2 chapters into 1 and dropped every 5 days or so instead of your current 1 chapter every 2/3 days. Maybe even combine 3 chapters into 1 and drop once a week. Idk, something for you to think about.
Ch 42 Eyes on the Prize- Mandeer12dCommented
Cringe
"May all of your enemies have their nipples ripped off and shoved down each other's throat." Harry said. The goblin blinked at him before nodding appreciatively. - Mandeer12dCommented
Lame name, but we move on
A week later and Harry was pleasantly surprised to still have his snake friend with him, the two had also settled in a name for him. One day Harry had simply decided on 'Jet', Harry had heard a teacher say 'jet black' and got the idea from that, it was a simple name but Harry liked it and his snake like it so it didn't really matter. - Mandeer14dReplied to TitanOfReadingCh 20 Chapter 20
- Mandeer16dCommentedCh 20 Chapter 20
- Mandeer18dCommentedCh 5 Snake Army
- Mandeer18dCommented
The whole light vs dark debate is getting dragged so much. Harry’s been moaning about how he doesn’t have any control over his life, could have died at the quidditch World Cup, all of the other past incidents, and when he finally gets a chance to change all of that he is still hung up on this. Now I have to ask, is the story actually going to delve into dark magic or is the title clickbait?
Salazar had told Harry that reading the introduction of the book might be able to persuade him that rituals weren't evil or dark. Harry was beginning to agree with the portrait. While the branch of magic was given a bad reputation, it seemed fairly interesting, and very useful, as shown by the first few paragraphs of the book's foreword. - Mandeer18dCommented"My friends are going to think I've gone evil or something." muttered Harry.
- Mandeer18dCommentedCh 18 Chapter 18
- Mandeer20dCommentedCh 30 The Secret of Enhanced Spellcasting
- Mandeer20dCommentedCh 29 Wand Selection
- Mandeer20dCommentedCh 17 Serpent's Whisper
- Mandeer20dCommented
Is Harry going to be working for the light? It seems like the story is progressing in that direction unfortunately. I assumed he would be heading towards the dark side. Doesn’t mean he has to be a death eater under Voldemort or anything, but I would like to see a dark lord Harry.
Ch 25 The Dark Knight and the Dark Lord - Mandeer20dCommentedCh 1 The Start of a Beautiful Friendship
- Mandeer1mthCommented
Guns are so lame in fantasy media/literature. I hope it doesn’t go this route
And if not, it's not my fault, I need to level the playing field. I'll somehow mix up some gunpowder and start making guns, it's their own fault. Then we'll see who's who. - Mandeer4mthCommented
hmmm idk about this tbh.. if it’s essentially Blackbeard’s power set then I wouldn’t mind (Yami Yami no mi & Gura Gura no mi)
*Blessing 2: Multiple devil fruit user: You can eat at most 3 devil fruit, but you will also suffer from the usual devil fruit curse e.g. hated by the sea, seastone, any drawbacks of the devil fruit.