Gavin_APYT

Only reason it got a 3.6 was because the author did write the the chapters well. But there is zero world development, and the book shows no signs of giving the reader what it promised without having to pay for it.

Disappointing. Up until the paid chapters, NOTHING in the synopsis is even remotely hinted at to becoming true/coming to light. It is a complete slice of life novel. This leaves the readers with no way to judge what they came here for without pay, which was a poor decision.

Don’t know if you can answer this, but when you say break from it, do you just mean coming back to it at a later date or like breaking it apart (starting the process of removing harem from the story all together), other then that, sounds good. I look forward to the path you take in this book, but do remember, that this is your book, not mine or anyone else’s. Do what you think is best, not what a few people demand based on the threat of dropping (harem and non-harem readers), as they can’t represent the majority in any way. Good luck man, and happy writing

So that a final nail in the coffin no? Unfortunate. Will say tho, if you look at some of the top rated stories, they do have harem (which are done right), so you won’t lack an audience by any means. You have it set up PERFECTLY for you to slowly start developing them, so it would also make your work easier + flow better. Idk, your book at the end of the day. Just think you have introduced some pretty unique characters (even with a lack of character development), and I don’t want to see that go to waste as being a semi-irrelevant side character, which is what they will have to be if you want a emotionalist MC evolving towards infinity.

Alright, I’ll trust you there. But on a side note, it seems you have made the official decision for it to not be harem, but seem to have built the story around it (partially), and trying to remove that without using your almighty author powers to just say “no” is going to be very hard while still making sense. This is even further reinforced that in recent chapters the other version of him saying he would sometimes go on to marry a lot of them. I’m neutral on harems in most story’s, but I think it would be a shame after all this building for it not to be. If you do decide to do it tho, please do it right and give the characters some development other then just being crazy murderers 😂 . Loving the story tho man, your a excellent author 👍

Hmmm, everything is for the grind in the end. Could you be eluding to him raising loot bags from the ground up? Would be extremely unfortunate if you introduce and build (even if it’s limited) this many characters just to kill them off and/or throw them away…

Contains spoilers + I need someone to spoil. I’m on chapter 200 ish rn, and I’m wondering if he will keep going down the path of lies. I do not see a way that this ends in any way decent. Just wondering if this is still going on in the later chapters.

It was literally mentioned in chapters before about him seeing umbrella shaped evils???? Is he retarted?

Could you perhaps start including scientific notation? Around the 120 mark you stop being able to tell how much he really has advanced, as all it’s far surpassed numbers you know of.

Have we reached the point where Beelze has come back? Or any indications of it