Jheydi327

Uh is this fic still valid? I just saw the Raw and it has over 500 chaps..

Bruh, some of the new readers seems a bit dissapointed from what MC does, you have to reread this Fic 4-8 time to understand the mc more deeply.. specialy his character, Btw i reread this for about 9 times soo I know were MC's character is going a bit XDD.

Bruh, have you been reading the last 20 chapters? Like bruh read this starting at the first chapter and you will knpw the whole story and also what kind of character MC has..

The Title of this fic is missleading!.. little Bad execution from the start..

bruh srsly?.. this kind of mc???? again????.. is there any more realistic mc?

Chinese MC xD

Author, i just realize until this point.. The story seems lacking something and seems to be bland.. It feels like reading a Machine or an essay. Why don't you use some ! in some narrations or descriptions for the readers to visualize their reactions. Its too bland where you only use ! ONLY in a dialogue of characters when talking.

Bruh, Even Author writes with One hand. its obvious from misspelled words LOL XD

what I imagine Mc will look like dodging.. XD