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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv52yr
2021-12-21 14:19

this version is more informative and not as fast paced as your other version which made no sense. *************************************************

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Kevin_Voss
Kevin_VossLv4

this review makes no sense.

jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5

did you not read his other version (if you haven't read them, take a look and you will understand)

Kevin_Voss:this review makes no sense.
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