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Gr1m_R34p3r
Gr1m_R34p3rLv12yr
2022-01-15 10:26

The Mc has a shop where he can buy ANYTHING. Androids with micro solar panels in their pores…. Star Wars weaponry etc. there has to be a limit at some point and how did it go from buying anything to just getting it for free? I’ll take a deathstar plz. The shop should have reasonable limits along with actual buying via points or something of the sort. The dimensional space gets planted and almost never used but always kept secret.

The Walking Dead, John Adler

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3.9
97 Chs

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the_chunky_panda
the_chunky_pandaLv13

agreed. when you can buy anything then it breaks your world as there is no limitation (other than the MC's i.q.). why not buy automated defence systems. chemical weapons. There are a thousand things to blitz the whole apocalypse and restart civilization with just this wish itself.

2yr
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Gamerz_Sal
Gamerz_SalLv2

Lol you dont get free stuffs and call that a shop... Its not a shop then, its just your inventory...

9mth
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Anthony_Huffman_1174
Anthony_Huffman_1174Lv13

That's the way things go either It's overpriced to the extreme or it's too cheap. No one wants to do a comfortable medium. When overprocess, it usually is that way because you get nothing for killing the zombies. But here's the thing it's not overpowered like people want to claim because he's still just 1 person in a world filled with billions of zombies. I mean, even if they have defensible walls and a good number of fighters, they still get over. One over and over again so I'm not going to complain if he has a super shop. The truth is, 1 person can't even do all that much. Maybe save a few of the people in the plot that didn't. That die too easily maybe add to the group. But as far as being a big game changer, s*** still going to go down, it's still gonna be bad, just with his help. It might be a little less. So I'll always hate it if they killed Amy and then they killed Sophia. Dale and N Glenn those those 4 were some of my favorites even though Amy wasn't in it that long. I like the character. I hated that they killed so many of the main characters that they didn't kill in the comic book.

1mth
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