Kevin_Voss

This is better than most of harry potter fanfics who are constantly updating. The english is, for me, fabulous. Story development, kinda sad about Ron not being there but during this kind of times he's being kind of a D##k to his friend, kinda childish for someone who survived 2 years of trouble. Character design is good, never seen nor read any of the essence of archmage in here, a great start as well. Update stability is meh. I just hope you'll stabilize your updating sched, you're doing great though, honestly. World background is good too, despite following the original story, your changes are definitely a fresh one. Since people overtly change too much within the main story that it's getting annoying. And they'll eventually drop it, but i hope you wont. It's definitely good, just hoping for good fortunes for another update. Keep up the good work author!!

A blasphemous pig

TONY!

OH HAIL THE CUTE DYNASTY !

Very dark, i like it

Mwhehehe

I doubt i can give better ideas than the ones who already did. Keep doing a good work author!!!

Hehehehe

I don't even remember anything abt this fanfic anymore 😭