Ahh yes, let me drop this book and complain without even reading the full development and call it people's waste of time.

Son 15 capítulos, literalmente paso la regla de los 10 primeros que se leen para saber como es el mc y de que trata la historia, si no te atrapo con eso entonces la historia no es del gusto del lector...

El hecho de que el lector no haya notado el cambio de comportamiento antes de los 12 capítulos muestra la cantidad de atención que está prestando. Si bien Tobi admitirá que muchos de los libros tienen esta historia de muerte cerebral, el libro de Tobi tiene más historia y personalidad profundas que tiene algún sentido. (Google Translate.)

What do you mean, if he find the first impression isn't good enough for him then why do you think he will even read the "full development"? Look i wrote stories too, both fanfic and for animation & games, and i understand what alot of this author when they say about "full development" but the truth is, no matter what first impression is important in this kind of stuff, if the reader can't connect or doesn't have impactful first impression, of course they wouldn't continue it nor care about future development. that's how powerful first impression is. i like your story, i find it decent enough from most of the fic i have read in this website, just gonna tell you about that after reading this review and your comment on it

Alright, let's see the case the reader has read let's say the first 5-7 chapters where it should have been quite clear that the MC's personality was clearly changed from his way of talking and thinking in the prologue to something else. After reading the first twelve as the guy here read it should have been really clear that MC's personality is different from how he acted in the BNHA world. Character development in the first 3 chapters is just an OP MC who goes hippity hoppity your life is my property. While Tobi sometimes does read about such OP MC the plot left for the author is reduced by quite a margin making the story repetitive and bearing at some point and then the nerf start. While Tobi also used a similar plot to nerf the MC after the Naruto world Tobi made sure to keep it within the line of plot story and common sense. Personalty: As commented by the fellow reader the MC had too nice of personality for liking which is absolutely fine but seeing MC in a calm state before and after the BNHA world should have raised some bells or curiosity to read another chapter. From chapter 13 (The Naruto arc) as you may have read, you must have noticed MC getting progressively more and more in the line of killing that is developed for living in the world of ninja for years. It takes years to gather gut, courage, and support to change one's views unless the circumstances force one. MC's behavior, personality, and character is growing through every arc at least for three arcs at the current time. MC has gone from a modern man to over confident and loud hero to a silent planner and now in the world of One Piece surrounded by crazy strong drunkards MC has become a rather confident person who has no hesitation to kill anyone in his path or anyone deemed unlikeable to MC. MC now has become a true leader rather than just a manipulator and now further development awaits as a new path opens to MC's journey. Thanks for reading.

what pekokopiko is saying is that first impression is powerful to the point of even if you have update rates of 1chapter per month the readers will stay on your novel if your first impression of the characters and the world background is at the level of 'Wow', its like you didn't expect that the mc background is like this, mc has been through that, etc. example of this is TDG like some waited for years just for a few hours of reading. thats why edgy and tragic mc were a thing back in 2010. now why am I writing something you would not probably read? who knows! but your BNHA volume gave us impression of 'hey thats new' level with him being a todoroki and shoto being gender bent but it just fall short, firstly it has the feel of slice of life but not too much, secondly it feels like it lack the stracture/ framework like you have written it while being 'enlightened' well the goal of the volume is vague so theres that. every volume/ark has its purpose and it is to keep the 'first impression' alive and increasing it bit by bit by slowly unveiling the plot of your story, your goal for this story. now your naruto ark which I am currently reading by the way, has that feel of wishfulfillment that is not really trendy anymore. the stats (as for my current chapter 20) is just a number you didn't really give us a comparison like whats the standing of 7000 in power compared to the shinobis. thats all I can say for now I'm not finish reading it yet. so what I can tell you is that in this era where there is thousands of fanfics in webnovel alone first Impression is really important its what make your book be remembered but keeping it alive is far more important its what makes the readers stay to satisfy their curiosity and finish reading your book.

listen dude its just not for me simple as that ive even tried picking it up but i cant stop cringing if someone dosent like your story then dont try to force it a lot of people like ur fan fic what does it matter if i dontt i even ttried being nice by giving it a decent rating but honesttly its a 1 for me

exactly its just not for me

The only thing is Tobi is not forcing anyone to read it that when you are calling it a waste of time of others that is what Tobi does not like about it. Tobi has kept the ratings and has never said to anyone that you have to read it it's that you are calling it a waste of time.

its a waste o\f time for me and itll be a waste of time for people who dont like the story too

Thanks for the review.

What an attitude. lol I read this a lot from many authors. Many authors tend to complain that people judging their book too early but doesn't sympathize wasting the readers time and even telling them to "read more if you want something interesting" in this case you didn't say it but you threw a sarcasm remark against him. Asking readers to invest their time on reading a story which they aren't sure if worth investing in was just not right, it was the writers job to make the readers immersed into the story, you can't blame him if he lost his interest so curb your sarcasm dude.

I fully agree but frankly that me did not care at all

THANK YOU saved my time bro....I really HATE these kinds of idiotic goody two shoes losers.

Bruh , Same