Doll_Shururu

The story seems interesting but man MC's personality is a huge turn off. He acts so self-important, he is very pretentious. He thinks he's a badass and a smartass, he's too "cool" for his own good. MC is the definitive example of someone who thinks they're so cool but they can't see how cringe they actually are. He's basically a chuunibyou who thinks his every move is cool. It's giving me secondhand embarrassment. Smh.

MC is pretty naive to me, MC had complete memories of his past but his personality doesn't match his past and acts like a 12-year-old. MC also had to learn COMMON life lessons from another freaking teenager and guess what MC goes excited as if he learned some next level life hacks.

First of all this isn't smut. There are few R-18 but definitely not smut. First-half of the novel doesn't even have romance. Second of all, there's no gore. Welp anyways, let's move on. 1-150 chapters is a Glorified Recap of the Original Naruto plotlines but it's a nice touch with a colder protagonist, aside from minor changes it's mostly the same as canon. 150-300 chapters had some changes but it's basically above average quality overall. Plot is quite weak. The Cultivation aspect of the story isn't detailed and lacks depth. Ninja aspect is very weak too. There is no politics either. Romance is quite nice and sweet. Character interaction is mildly fun. R-18 chapters isn't important, you can skip it and doesn't impact the story at all. The characters are lacking a bit in individuality as the way they speak are basically the same as everyone because author's vocabulary is quite lacking which failed to show some unique quirks of the characters' own personality. Last and Final chapters of the novel is a nice closure, the ending is good but feels bittersweet. I felt empty. It's been a while since i feel melancholic finishing a novel. Overall this novel is 4/5 stars at best. Mainly because the story didn't go to the level of BAD and consistent to it's quality, it fluctuate between average and mildly enjoyable. It's worth reading as long as you don't expect blood-pumping excitement. Plot isn't great so just read it for character interaction. Recommended! It's good enough for me to recommend others to read this! PS: After finishing this it makes me crave for more Naruto fanfics with romance especially with Ino as Fmc. lol

MC's is not an interesting character, trying too hard on his righteous facade. MC's emotions feels so artificial and fake. Side characters in this novel are even worse their personality are so bland, author completely fails to deliver their personalities and there is no any interesting scenarios to note. Character interactions has no depth. This is a boring fanfic that felt hollow and pointless. It's been years since i read a pointless fanfic like thos one. No goal! No emotion! No stakes! No humour! No R-18! No wishfulfilment! Bad dialogues! Bad romance! Why even read this?? This novel had nothing to offer at all.

Quote: "Tang Shaoyang was pretty calm as this was not his first time facing the crawler." This.. according to this line above, Swiffer and Crawler is the same. Another proof is in chapter 6, Swiffer and Crawler have the [Claw Strike] ability. Another proof is that Author even mistakes the name of the MC Tang Shaoyang as "Heero" So yea this is just author being retarded. The fact that mistaking the name of his own main character again and again and again and again and again, so forgetting the setting of his own monsters isn't the worst yet.

Quote: "Tang Shaoyang was pretty calm as this was not his first time facing the crawler." This.. according to this line above, Swiffer and Crawler is the same. Another proof is in chapter 6, Swiffer and Crawler have the [Claw Strike] ability. Another proof is that Author even mistakes the name of the MC Tang Shaoyang as "Heero" So yea this is just author being retarded. The fact that mistaking the name of his own main character again and again and again and again and again, so forgetting the setting of his own monsters isn't the worst yet.

I tried to read this twice but ended up dropping it again, the premise pique my interest but the writing is just ruining this for me. The grammar only had minor mistakes and doesn't make the story intelligible but the problem is that there's quite a lot of these 'minor mistakes', the grammar is worse than google translation i use when i read raw novels, but still somewhat acceptable compared to many stories from this site. The narrations are also very verbose (i hate unnecessary longer narrations than it's suppose to be), like descriptions of many things in the story specially the wuxia way of introducing the characters. The main problem is the frustrating writing style, the story follow the style of "Show don't tell" kind of writing. The story doesn't have any proper structure or long-term planning. The flow was being repeatedly interrupted, because author just had to "explain" everything that comes out of his mind and most of these explanations are info dumps that are not necessary at the moment yet you are forced to read through those explanations. Which is why the story often veered off from the actual scene and interrupted the flow and the story thus goes to a halt. You had to finish reading all those info dump paragraphs first before the story continue to flow again. It was said the story gets better by chapter 18 but not for me, it gets worse. Well i tried, sadly this fanfic is not for me.

"Starve for parental attention" Dude. You have a foster father who took care of you for 15 years already and gave you his attention, even made an effort to spend his time teaching you to become strong and you even said you've grown attached to him, yet you're still 'Starved' for parental attention? Just How much more you want? Do want grandpa Garp to give you some Fist of Love til you have your fill?!!

You empathize with the mc but you fail to notice that he had a foster father. Crying for his parents he will never met is completely fine, but saying he is "Starve for parental attention" is simply ungrateful and cold. Let's have a moment of silence for the foster father's unappreciated effort.