DollShururu

I tried to read this twice but ended up dropping it again, the premise pique my interest but the writing is just ruining this for me. The grammar only had minor mistakes and doesn't make the story intelligible but the problem is that there's quite a lot of these 'minor mistakes', the grammar is worse than google translation i use when i read raw novels, but still somewhat acceptable compared to many stories from this site. The narrations are also very verbose (i hate unnecessary longer narrations than it's suppose to be), like descriptions of many things in the story specially the wuxia way of introducing the characters. The main problem is the frustrating writing style, the story follow the style of "Show don't tell" kind of writing. The story doesn't have any proper structure or long-term planning. The flow was being repeatedly interrupted, because author just had to "explain" everything that comes out of his mind and most of these explanations are info dumps that are not necessary at the moment yet you are forced to read through those explanations. Which is why the story often veered off from the actual scene and interrupted the flow and the story thus goes to a halt. You had to finish reading all those info dump paragraphs first before the story continue to flow again. It was said the story gets better by chapter 18 but not for me, it gets worse. Well i tried, sadly this fanfic is not for me.

"Starve for parental attention" Dude. You have a foster father who took care of you for 15 years already and gave you his attention, even made an effort to spend his time teaching you to become strong and you even said you've grown attached to him, yet you're still 'Starved' for parental attention? Just How much more you want? Do want grandpa Garp to give you some Fist of Love til you have your fill?!!

You empathize with the mc but you fail to notice that he had a foster father. Crying for his parents he will never met is completely fine, but saying he is "Starve for parental attention" is simply ungrateful and cold. Let's have a moment of silence for the foster father's unappreciated effort.

People have different opinions so theres nothing wrong about it.

True. I read about 300+ chapters and the story gets really annoying when same scenes appears for the umpteenth time.

This is really disappointing. I thought this is about Adventures and Dimensional Travel but 75% of the story content is filled with Experiments and Info-dumps about it and it just doesn't end! Then author decided to forget all interaction between characters and just keep overusing timeskip to make relationship to progress lol. Even his relationship with his wives felt shallow and distant yet he insist that he love them and there's no problem with their relationship lmao. The characters had no depth whatsoever. There's also the Worldbuilding, all the process of building his Empire was all dumped into the 35years timeskip, so many parts was skipped like Building the Empire, Colonizing the solar system, the Existence of Kingdom Atlantis on Earth was just brush aside along with all the Space Travel. So much infodumps for Experiments but didn't bother working on it's characters and the world. Besides the MC already had so much Plotarmor and Cheats: [Ultimate Talent], [Ultimate Luck], and the author had the gall talking about creating tension in the story when MC had an [OP Mysterious Grandpa] he can run off to and ask for help anytime shit happens. MC also get some OP [Cosmic Awareness] ability that can detect Cosmic Level Enteties. You would think the MC started without much blessings at beginning but as you read on you will realize he get more CHEATS even in the middle of the story, so many asspulls. The side characters and some Peak Level Gods also for some reason support everything the MC wants to do so even if some other Gods oppose the MC there's no tension because more Stronger Gods got his back. TLDR: It's not about about adventures and dimensional travels because even when he goes to other universes MC only focus on his experiments most of the time. So only read this if you're prepared for shitton of Infodumps about experiments because that's what this story is about. An experimental log.

A fun story from the start but didn't last long. After about 50 chapters the character interaction starts to worsen and the story lose it's creativity. It's obvious that the author lacks new ideas and just squeezing the story of it's worth. The MC's voice-heart dialogues becomes Cringe asf. Author is just forcing himself to write water chapters without any substance.

Well it's not as bad as i thought. I thought it was a total garbage fanfic but the idea and romance is actually pretty fun tbh. I actually enjoyed it. 🔸1-40 chapters : They're alright, interesting. MC is mid and not very likable but not too bad. 🔸40-100 chapters : Around this part of the story is very fun to which i enjoyed the most. You will like the MC as he starts to change and starts to act caring and it has quite heartwarming moments. 🔸100+ chapters : It became pointless and boring. MC degraded again, he became so full of himself and he pretty much just focus on sex thoughts and humiliating his girls by making them do degrading stuff. Romance and plot isn't even there anymore, they're like his pet or sex toy. Too much focus on boring porn & slice-of-life, it felt just like pointless fillers. Idk what happened but the story never felt the same after chapter 103 so i dropped it around chapter 120+. Overall it's not a bad read. Read the first 100 chaps you might enjoy it. ~

Although grammar and writing style of the author isn't bad. This doesn't look like a quality story. —Comedic-undertone is not funny and quite dull. The Father acts goofy when his son boutta die and Gods have a maturity of a month old baby, one time a God is said to be "rolling on the floor, laughing" just because MC make a weird face. goo goo ga ga. —Bad system. System has plotholes (if u could call it that) to it's main function. The system main function is each level-up will allow the MC to get "additional class" by copying the binded women's Job-classes, so the System function won't work if he bind women with the same classes, like for example: If he wants to bind a certain woman but he already had her class he can't do that because it will waste bind slot! What's more is that there's only 3 classes in the world, so when system reach levels 4 and above there will no new class for him, even if he bind dozens of women he won't receive any more classes! It's pretty much a crippled system. Well tbh what got me to leave is that i'm not sold on the idea of Gods watching everything about the MC. Imagine you're having sex and your wife moaning and doing different positions with you but you know Gods are watching her like a pornstar. Welp this isn't for me. This story is prob fine for a if you don't have anything to read.