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The_Hanged_Man1Author3yr
2021-11-23 12:01

I wrote this novel because I love the game Honkai Impact 3, and imagined there would be a happy ending without yuri, or something like that.

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RANCIDITYLv4

is there any harem author

Nay_02Lv3

In Honkai Mihoyo will make a couple that is not Yuri won't go smoothly, Mihoyo will make them have a tragic ending Lol

The_Hanged_Man1Author

Maybe

RANCIDITY:is there any harem author
RANCIDITYLv4

so can you tell me some potential love interest author?

The_Hanged_Man1:Maybe
RealMainCharacterLv14

Himeko won't die?

Fox_dveillLv1

Harem!🥺🥺🥺 please 🥺🥺🥺

InfinityXzLv3

Stop posting troll chapters, smh I bet it's gonna be worse at april fools

ghustVLv5

崩坏世界的我天命上班 For those that feel that this is a Chinese novel machine translated... it practically is. I did waste my time and hope wishing that this one would be a original...

TenkainijnaLv1

bruh

ghustV:崩坏世界的我天命上班 For those that feel that this is a Chinese novel machine translated... it practically is. I did waste my time and hope wishing that this one would be a original...
GHD_Kashiko371Lv4

is this the abyss herrscher ??? or something cuz the author can translate all he wants but he needs to have access to the VIP chapters right we get translateds ones which we thought he made but it just a translation we still win in the end cuz we get to read it for free and English too

OtagemaLv4

Each chapter leaves me on my toes... In a seizure filled with anticipation.

Lion_King72Lv3

I hope the story is written to the end, not on hiatus or dropped[img=update][img=recommend]

IsseiODRLv3

Hokai es Yuri?

CLIFF_CHANLv14

the author just copy 1-60 chapters of original changing some of it like the original have gacha this one is Solo leveling system

ghustV:崩坏世界的我天命上班 For those that feel that this is a Chinese novel machine translated... it practically is. I did waste my time and hope wishing that this one would be a original...
ghustVLv5

Thanks for your testimony of him copying 60 chapters of the original.

CLIFF_CHAN:the author just copy 1-60 chapters of original changing some of it like the original have gacha this one is Solo leveling system
CLIFF_CHANLv14

well the author announced it before he Relax that 1-60 are not his well the original was sucks anyway

ghustV:Thanks for your testimony of him copying 60 chapters of the original.
DaoistjcJwtWLv1

Por casualidad tengo una pregunta elysia va estar en el harem ????

The_PufferLv14

Will he get the herchester of void?

aceZ0Lv4

ofc there are already some fun interactions with her.

The_Puffer:Will he get the herchester of void?
JustHavinFunReadinLv12

I wish she was, but probably not. Who knows, though. Also, stop speaking Spanish. You people are annoying. You can speak it in the comments and reviews of Spanish novels, but speak in a language everyone that reads the novel understands.

DaoistjcJwtW:Por casualidad tengo una pregunta elysia va estar en el harem ????
Other Reviews
N1ght_Shad0wLv1

(I put a lot of 4, because I am very scrupulous and strict) So, please do not reverse my grammar, because it is bad. But this does not prevent me from fully understanding and translating English speech or text into another language. And as a translator(About which the author knows because I asked him for permission), I will note for the author that together with my team, I have already translated and even polished the text itself in the amount of 18 chapters. So let's start with the pros. First, the plot:The plot is good, very good, not too fast, not too slow. Tightens, sometimes even makes you exclaim: "Aaaah, so that's the catch," and we have to admit, sometimes he evokes a smile. Let's be honest, the author has good help and he, like everyone else, has something to strive for (But this does not mean that you need to do it like some (Or rather, delete chapters and say: "Ay, I'll rewrite." NO !!! In no case No! You need to change, improve the work after it is completely written, otherwise the work will lie like a dead weight at the bottom of your memory)). The second is the characters: They are good, they have elaboration and development, you see how they gradually change their attitude, you feel some kind of "life"! Third - text: I'll be honest, being somewhat of a "scientist", I didn't mention one very important thing at first... The text at the beginning looks like "dry" laying out of facts (I looked there. Lives there. Something happened.). In translation, everything looks exactly like this, and it was because of this that everything had to be pretty polished. Namely, to make a "softer" transition between paragraphs, slightly changing the direct speech, adding idioms and adverbs. But I admit, the situation in the following chapters got a little better. (Of course, maybe I'm nitpicking, and all because it's a translation? Or maybe I'm just nitpicking) Fourth - stability: BEAUTIFUL! My regards! Well, the fifth - the world: This is fanfiction, so there's not much to say here. The author did something that was not in the game, he created explanations for some misunderstandings (Especially why there are only WAIFU in the world). There are some inaccuracies, inconsistencies... I won’t specify, because you have to sit and look for it (If I didn’t remember the very fact of their findings, I would put 5) Drawing conclusions: The work is good and worth reading. It has its pros and cons, like other jobs. Perhaps a huge plus is that the author does not rush to rewrite the work, because somewhere he might not get something or he might have a desire to rewrite something. Yes, and the frequency of chapters and the absence of breaks give a HUGE credibility to the author. And a good plot and a slow increase in the quality of work, allows you to place BIG hopes. I thank the author for the good work and for the fact that he does not give up fanfiction. And I sincerely hope he doesn't. And I hope he doesn't start rewriting it before he's done. Good luck and all the best.

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