Item: Unbound Familiar
Rating: 2
Author: _Medeiros

_MedeirosLv23yr

2021-10-30 05:37

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Unbound Familiar

Niggross

3.0

713 Chs

Liked by 105 people

Replies11

0ne_eyed_k1ngLv11

explain please? i wanna know how stupid the mc actually is.

3yr

Run_from_big_mumLv4

tries to follow plot even after one of the important characters were taken out. I won't say who or what happened to them, but yea, MC is pretty dumb. -_-

0ne_eyed_k1ng:explain please? i wanna know how stupid the mc actually is.

3yr

PsanLv5

I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.

2yr

lazyvampiredemonasLv4

Well the mc is stupid for one he tries to do stuff stupidly. Examples are Spoiler Instead of trying to show his powers through words or action he tried to follow plot

0ne_eyed_k1ng:explain please? i wanna know how stupid the mc actually is.

2yr

lazyvampiredemonasLv4

But still dumb in handling things. His the type to do things that are unnecessary. Still dumb and my brain hurts with his starting decision. Firstly his anti-social but he already taken note off him being a familiar of louise- yes she’s abusive and a bit crazed but why would he think she’s gonna kill him for having magic. It was the first or last thing he should think off. Specifically because his supposedly enchanted to care for louise… I don’t really see it- I don’t care anymore. I already wrote this so

Psan:I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.

2yr

0ne_eyed_k1ngLv11

i read a little bit of it didnt he kill a important side character and got louise kicked out of school and ran away? at that point what plot is there to follow

lazyvampiredemonas:Well the mc is stupid for one he tries to do stuff stupidly. Examples are Spoiler Instead of trying to show his powers through words or action he tried to follow plot

2yr

lazyvampiredemonasLv4

i do believe the author is trying to make a different experience. where the main character grows on his flaws but his kinda just dumb in his own way. for me at least being anti-social means not wanting to social meaning i have to know ways on how to not be social.

0ne_eyed_k1ng:i read a little bit of it didnt he kill a important side character and got louise kicked out of school and ran away? at that point what plot is there to follow

2yr

Aeol_OmniusLv2

I am 100% sure that you would never want to become the enemy of the protagonist of this novel from the last chapters.

2yr

Jugo_SethLv12

isnce he was unconscious when the blond ponce got ofended by the maid she got a several lashings and fired feom the academy next thing we know mc decides to be antagonistic to said ponce and end up killings him by accident then try to escape get caught punch the old lady escapes the academy leaving Louise to deal the the ponce's father but the problem is the mc choices and the author penchant for making the mc nerfed and weaker than he's supposed to be and pretry much all enemies much stonger than they have any right to be am all.caught up and the mc is still supid op to non importart mobs but weak to anyone else also he gets the chance to tranfor into a dragon for power leveling but decides to go with single target hero also mc ignores things like a daedra like claicus vile to have a trleam.mate in speed dial while it being obvious the daedra prince was messing with the situation i read this novel because i like the idea that its pretty good but the author just wants to force a lot of things to happen in a tragic probably world ending way and mc is not hoarding books about magic from the magic college for future use in other worlds but i got the special book dont need any of that attitude that have been getting him into trouble has not changed and the stupid ideas also dont change

0ne_eyed_k1ng:i read a little bit of it didnt he kill a important side character and got louise kicked out of school and ran away? at that point what plot is there to follow

2yr

Jugo_SethLv12

why all.his enemies get observation haki and ultra inticts with auto defend and attack and auto counter

Aeol_Omnius: I am 100% sure that you would never want to become the enemy of the protagonist of this novel from the last chapters.

2yr

TriPlatinumLv5

I've read up to the recent chapter and can confirm that you are indeed wrong

Jugo_Seth:why all.his enemies get observation haki and ultra inticts with auto defend and attack and auto counter

2yr

Other Reviews

50ShadesOfAssLv14

Familar Zero. The anime that started my hate for “Beta”, lame and Garbage main characters Unfortunately it is no different here. Possibly worse because this is a fanfiction and you expect something different This mc is so fûcking lame it hurts. I dont like using the word Beta or simp anymore, but thats exactly what this mc is He becomes Louis familiar and just accepts becoming a slave. He pervs on girls then acts like a loser once he Gets caught Simps on Louis as she proceeds to beat him up, abuse him while calling him her personal dog. what happens after though? Like the loser he is, Mc just blushes cause shes naked and continues to get beat up Dont bother reading this trash

3yr

ZetswayLv12

The MC is just plain bad. He accepts being a rag even easier then Satou. While I could understand his need to play along at the start since he had no power, why is he a slave after he got stronger? And, even if Loise is 16, she looks like a gradeschooler, how can he perv on someone like that? All in all, it's a subpar work.

3yr

lord_couchpotatoLv3

The story is not that bad TBH, writing is good and from what i can see is that author is consistent. Most of the people here are just giving it 1-2 stars just because they think mc is beta or simp. But you need to understand it's author's story and that's how he wants to write. If you want to read about an virgin otaku teenager who suddenly becomes alpha dominant male just because he is reincarnated to another world go read dozens or so other wish-fulfillment novels on this site. This world is set up where cards are already against mc, People are complaining about how satou dealt with being a slave better than mc well that's a idiotic way of thinking being a slave and trying to show you are not obedient towards your master would have been death sentence for sure if this anime was not a kid friendly one and if the master was not a teenage girl but rather a cruel one he would have been whipped to shape. I mean c'mon people are complaining how wish-fullfilment novels are not real enough but when someone is trying to make it a bit real people are complaining that mc is not dominant enough. I too like a cool and dominant mc but i would not just hate every other personality that the author's try to cook up. Rating a novel based on just mc's personality is not fair to the author. If the personality is not constructed properly or erratic to the point it breaks immersion i can understand that but giving it 1 star just because mc is not a dominant alpha male is just stupid.

3yr

Sword_1mmortalLv14

Bro, he's even worse than Saito. This is practically an even worse version of the familiar of zero. The original mc at least had somewhat of a spine, this one is trash. He's a loser, "Beta of Zero" should be the title

3yr

Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Chapter 1 to Chapter 30, Mc is pathetic. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr

BierbartLv14

Reveal spoiler

3yr

DvD_007Lv5

well not enough words cam describe how much of an annoyance this mc is so i will leave it at that. you know how people just throw the world beta to any character? well this mc truly deserves it, even saito looks like a chad compared to this mc

2yr

_James_Jones_Lv5

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3yr

InkywolfLv5

one of my favorite writers ,with daily updates and evolving writing style , here for a new beginning to a great story cheers [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr

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