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Bierbart
BierbartLv143yr
2021-11-05 22:29

Well not much to say. The english is good as expected of the author. But with the author it also means to expect not much romance and similar. Also no gary stue MC or generally a strong MC without a lot of suffering. Would be an ok read but sadly the MC is how others descriped it the ultraversion of a beta-simp. Its basically a slave MC who accepts it pretty easy and wont really make it better. That he behaves a bit like the cliché virgins on the wrong side of a NTR story doesnt really help :/ So great work at writing author for the grammar, but the plot and characters are for special tastes

Unbound Familiar

Niggross
3.0
713 Chs

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laliel
lalielLv14

lol, special taste[img=faceslap]

3yr
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Harem_police
Harem_policeLv14

Read past chapter 2 and it will get better

3yr
3
Psan
PsanLv6

I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.

3yr
5
Aeol_Omnius
Aeol_OmniusLv2

I am 100% sure that you would never want to become the enemy of the protagonist of this novel from the last chapters.

3yr
5
TriPlatinum
TriPlatinumLv5

This fic is actually much better than you describe it as. Are you sure you read that far enough? The mc was being brainwashed into loyalty by the runes, and was weak because he didn't much time to get stronger. He ends up waging war on the world in later chapters and has so much character development that it's amazing. This fic is definitely a breath of fresh air, and takes a much more realistic approach. (And if this is about the mc being weak, well, he doesn't get any weaker. Only stronger, because with his cheats the only way is up.

2yr
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50ShadesOfAss
50ShadesOfAssLv14

Familar Zero. The anime that started my hate for “Beta”, lame and Garbage main characters Unfortunately it is no different here. Possibly worse because this is a fanfiction and you expect something different This mc is so fûcking lame it hurts. I dont like using the word Beta or simp anymore, but thats exactly what this mc is He becomes Louis familiar and just accepts becoming a slave. He pervs on girls then acts like a loser once he Gets caught Simps on Louis as she proceeds to beat him up, abuse him while calling him her personal dog. what happens after though? Like the loser he is, Mc just blushes cause shes naked and continues to get beat up Dont bother reading this trash

3yr

Zetsway
ZetswayLv13

The MC is just plain bad. He accepts being a rag even easier then Satou. While I could understand his need to play along at the start since he had no power, why is he a slave after he got stronger? And, even if Loise is 16, she looks like a gradeschooler, how can he perv on someone like that? All in all, it's a subpar work.

3yr
lord_couchpotato
lord_couchpotatoLv3

The story is not that bad TBH, writing is good and from what i can see is that author is consistent. Most of the people here are just giving it 1-2 stars just because they think mc is beta or simp. But you need to understand it's author's story and that's how he wants to write. If you want to read about an virgin otaku teenager who suddenly becomes alpha dominant male just because he is reincarnated to another world go read dozens or so other wish-fulfillment novels on this site. This world is set up where cards are already against mc, People are complaining about how satou dealt with being a slave better than mc well that's a idiotic way of thinking being a slave and trying to show you are not obedient towards your master would have been death sentence for sure if this anime was not a kid friendly one and if the master was not a teenage girl but rather a cruel one he would have been whipped to shape. I mean c'mon people are complaining how wish-fullfilment novels are not real enough but when someone is trying to make it a bit real people are complaining that mc is not dominant enough. I too like a cool and dominant mc but i would not just hate every other personality that the author's try to cook up. Rating a novel based on just mc's personality is not fair to the author. If the personality is not constructed properly or erratic to the point it breaks immersion i can understand that but giving it 1 star just because mc is not a dominant alpha male is just stupid.

3yr
_Medeiros
_MedeirosLv2

the story comes down to stupid MC 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

3yr
Sword_1mmortal
Sword_1mmortalLv14

Bro, he's even worse than Saito. This is practically an even worse version of the familiar of zero. The original mc at least had somewhat of a spine, this one is trash. He's a loser, "Beta of Zero" should be the title

3yr
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Chapter 1 to Chapter 30, Mc is pathetic. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
DvD_007
DvD_007Lv5

well not enough words cam describe how much of an annoyance this mc is so i will leave it at that. you know how people just throw the world beta to any character? well this mc truly deserves it, even saito looks like a chad compared to this mc

3yr
_James_Jones_
_James_Jones_Lv5

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3yr
Inkywolf
InkywolfLv5

one of my favorite writers ,with daily updates and evolving writing style , here for a new beginning to a great story cheers [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr
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