Well not much to say. The english is good as expected of the author. But with the author it also means to expect not much romance and similar. Also no gary stue MC or generally a strong MC without a lot of suffering. Would be an ok read but sadly the MC is how others descriped it the ultraversion of a beta-simp. Its basically a slave MC who accepts it pretty easy and wont really make it better. That he behaves a bit like the cliché virgins on the wrong side of a NTR story doesnt really help :/ So great work at writing author for the grammar, but the plot and characters are for special tastes
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LIKEI have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.
This fic is actually much better than you describe it as. Are you sure you read that far enough? The mc was being brainwashed into loyalty by the runes, and was weak because he didn't much time to get stronger. He ends up waging war on the world in later chapters and has so much character development that it's amazing. This fic is definitely a breath of fresh air, and takes a much more realistic approach. (And if this is about the mc being weak, well, he doesn't get any weaker. Only stronger, because with his cheats the only way is up.