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50ShadesOfAssLv143yr
2021-10-29 15:52

Familar Zero. The anime that started my hate for “Beta”, lame and Garbage main characters Unfortunately it is no different here. Possibly worse because this is a fanfiction and you expect something different This mc is so fûcking lame it hurts. I dont like using the word Beta or simp anymore, but thats exactly what this mc is He becomes Louis familiar and just accepts becoming a slave. He pervs on girls then acts like a loser once he Gets caught Simps on Louis as she proceeds to beat him up, abuse him while calling him her personal dog. what happens after though? Like the loser he is, Mc just blushes cause shes naked and continues to get beat up Dont bother reading this trash

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DobrilloLv5

How much i hate

XenonNobleLv13

Oof, I cringed just picturing that. Thank you for giving a blunt description of what happened so I don’t have to go through that. Feels bad, hope you found another webnovel you like.

Reinhard_tLv11

excatly man thoss types of mcs ugh id rather kill myself rather than be born like them or if its my son or brother ill educate them

MinhNam_LeLv4

Maybe author is secretly an M?

America_YeaLv3

Ok so I wish I had read this before diving in myself because this mc goes on to make extremely bad choices repeatedly on abilities. His picks when he has literally teleportation and permanent invisibility as well as a really good aoe are instead a lame spellcaster so he can make like he's a noble(that idea lasts all of one chapter before he kills a young master in a duel and somehow instead of honoring the results of a duel as is customary he's thrown in jail in spite of demonstrating that he has noble status via magic)

America_YeaLv3

And mind that the excuse used here is that "the mages probably have a way to detect him anyways" which doesn't hold water as the guy regularly sneaks past literally legendary mages on a regular basis in league.

America_Yea:Ok so I wish I had read this before diving in myself because this mc goes on to make extremely bad choices repeatedly on abilities. His picks when he has literally teleportation and permanent invisibility as well as a really good aoe are instead a lame spellcaster so he can make like he's a noble(that idea lasts all of one chapter before he kills a young master in a duel and somehow instead of honoring the results of a duel as is customary he's thrown in jail in spite of demonstrating that he has noble status via magic)
WiLeYBiGhEaDLv13

Thank you for your sacrifice.

Shin_SenpaiLv4

He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.

Harem_policeLv14

Read past chapter 1 perhaps?

EpithetEnjoyerLv1

Witch chapter is this so I can skip the simp?

Shin_Senpai:He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
Demiurge_OharaLv12

then a simp

Shin_Senpai:He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
Shin_SenpaiLv4

Everyone is a simp whether you accept it or not.

Demiurge_Ohara:then a simp
Demiurge_OharaLv12

Oomph, sadly I like the necessary hormones and this amount of simping in real life is equal to bankruptcy and/or suicide

Shin_Senpai:Everyone is a simp whether you accept it or not.
SurprisedPikachu1Lv4

when i first saw this novel: Oh a new fanfic!I know better to not trust novel reviews, I'll try it myself. *scrolled down and saw the author's other work, 'elderblood witcher in dark souls'. me:

PsanLv6

I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.

Gabichu_YeahLv3

Ok... happy?

Psan:I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.
TriPlatinumLv5

Cope

Gabichu_Yeah:Ok... happy?
Aeol_OmniusLv2

I am 100% sure that you would never want to become the enemy of the protagonist of this novel from the last chapters.

EpithetEnjoyerLv1

Also if the runes make them subservient, then how does one explain his pervy behaviour? or his continuous doing of said perverted actions? also just because he is 'now' doesn't mean his past actions just stop existing after that, its still there.

Shin_Senpai:He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
Shin_SenpaiLv4

I don't know about the pervy behavior as it was sort of instantly stopped. Also, about the last part, his actions are still indeed there but his character has developed beyond that.

EpithetEnjoyer:Also if the runes make them subservient, then how does one explain his pervy behaviour? or his continuous doing of said perverted actions? also just because he is 'now' doesn't mean his past actions just stop existing after that, its still there.
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