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Zetsway
ZetswayLv133yr
2021-10-29 16:50

The MC is just plain bad. He accepts being a rag even easier then Satou. While I could understand his need to play along at the start since he had no power, why is he a slave after he got stronger? And, even if Loise is 16, she looks like a gradeschooler, how can he perv on someone like that? All in all, it's a subpar work.

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TheFlameGamer
TheFlameGamerLv4

cuz anime is weird like that

laliel
lalielLv14

bro, don't ask someone taste. ask why people like 5 years old child

Grapejuice
GrapejuiceLv14

Love knows no boundaries, Jail is just a room, a body is but only a vessel, his perviness has transcended! Even crossing the forbidden line established by the Police Deity.

Chayton0
Chayton0Lv14

Somebody get this man in jail bro

Grapejuice:Love knows no boundaries, Jail is just a room, a body is but only a vessel, his perviness has transcended! Even crossing the forbidden line established by the Police Deity.
El_Tobi0999
El_Tobi0999Lv3

Already did

Chayton0:Somebody get this man in jail bro
TriPlatinum
TriPlatinumLv5

If you ask me people who can't separate reality from fiction are the ones who need help

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

Here's a warning for those who decided not to read the fanfic due to this review. In fact, what has been mentioned here is true, but this is very short-lived and there are very reasonable reasons for the mc to be like this in the beginning.

Zetsway
ZetswayLv13

Can you please state the reason? I just don't get why he lets himself be walked all over. Even more so, I don't get why he accepted to be kissed by Loise knowing that he would be turned into her slave.

Spelloyal:Here's a warning for those who decided not to read the fanfic due to this review. In fact, what has been mentioned here is true, but this is very short-lived and there are very reasonable reasons for the mc to be like this in the beginning.
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

I'll try to talk a little bit without spoiling too much. About being kissed, he didn't have much choice, it was very sudden and even thinking logically it was the best option at the moment since he was stuck in the magic academy and no one would give him the option to refuse and he is a common modern otaku, below average in everthing, stuck in a medieval world. Realistically speaking, he couldn't survive a month without relying on Louise (since he didn't have his cheat yet). It would have been better to adjust to the world for a while and then steal a few nobles before running away or something like that. He gets carried away easily at first as the Familiar contract has a slight brainwashing effect. It doesn't take away free will but makes the Familiar more adaptable to the situation. When the MC awaken his cheats, he intends to continue with Louise as he would have the perfect opportunity to learn magic if he proves to be a wizard, as obviously not everyone who enters the best magic academy. He also has a doomsday (the dragon on the anime) threat to survive and it would be safer to try to do that by following the canon. Obviously things don't work out and he splits up with Louise around chapter 20, so I recommend you give the novel a chance and read at least until chapter 25 before deciding to drop.

Zetsway:Can you please state the reason? I just don't get why he lets himself be walked all over. Even more so, I don't get why he accepted to be kissed by Loise knowing that he would be turned into her slave.
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

I recently did a review that explains more and mentions other points, you can check it out if you want.

Zetsway:Can you please state the reason? I just don't get why he lets himself be walked all over. Even more so, I don't get why he accepted to be kissed by Loise knowing that he would be turned into her slave.
uzisho
uzishoLv5

Grapejuice:Love knows no boundaries, Jail is just a room, a body is but only a vessel, his perviness has transcended! Even crossing the forbidden line established by the Police Deity.
Shin_Senpai
Shin_SenpaiLv11

He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.

What123466
What123466Lv3

Woah... Seems unlikely but Im reading chap20 so imma give it a chance

Shin_Senpai:He's 'beta'? He's now of Destroying villages and Torturing all the people that tortured him. He has forgotten about Louise. Also did you ever even watch Familiar of Zero? Do you not know that there are runes that force the familiar to be subservient to the Master...and how does that judge this novel as a 1-star? I mean like how.
Shin_Senpai
Shin_SenpaiLv11

I have like zero reasons to lie.

What123466:Woah... Seems unlikely but Im reading chap20 so imma give it a chance
Psan
PsanLv6

I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.

Zetsway
ZetswayLv13

I don't remember much from this, but if you read my review, the main problem I had was with the fact that he's perving on a child and feels like it's ok.

Psan:I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.
Aeol_Omnius
Aeol_OmniusLv2

I am 100% sure that you would never want to become the enemy of the protagonist of this novel from the last chapters.

DaoistEe13Ub
DaoistEe13UbLv12

He’ 15 bro he is a child πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ lit at Least 50 chapters in he mentions his age

Zetsway:I don't remember much from this, but if you read my review, the main problem I had was with the fact that he's perving on a child and feels like it's ok.
Zetsway
ZetswayLv13

Sure, but for someone who didn't read 50 chapters, it still feels like the MC is a pedo. That's an information which should have been provided at the start of the novel. As it is usually with self inserts, I, as a reader, will use my mentality for everything not directly described as if I was inserted into the story. Had the author mentioned that the MC is also a child, I would have judged it a bit differently. He was still a pervert tho.

DaoistEe13Ub:He’ 15 bro he is a child πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ lit at Least 50 chapters in he mentions his age
SEEKER
SEEKERLv14

ey 69

Chayton0:Somebody get this man in jail bro
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