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YgNear
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2021-11-14 13:11

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Psan
PsanLv5

I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.

Aeol_Omnius
Aeol_OmniusLv2

I am 100% sure that you would never want to become the enemy of the protagonist of this novel from the last chapters.

TriPlatinum
TriPlatinumLv5

This fic is actually much better than you describe it as. Are you sure you read that far enough? The mc was being brainwashed into loyalty by the runes, and was weak because he didn't much time to get stronger. His personality was weak and he made some bad decisions AT THE START. This all changes and he becomes a legit powerhouse. He ends up waging war on the world in later chapters and has so much character development that it's amazing. This fic is definitely a breath of fresh air, and takes a much more realistic approach. (And if this is about the mc being weak, well, he doesn't get any weaker. Only stronger, because with his cheats the only way is up.)

Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

He doesn't improve later on, even in chapter 700 he makes supernaturally stupid decisions... But I agree that the MC had no choice but to obey Louise at first since he is a modern human in a medieval world. He couldn't survive without support and would end up starving to death within the first month.

Psan:I have to disagree, we have a anti-social gamer thrown into another world after being almost killed and confronted by a louise, a person with a VERY strong character with MAGIC. You cannot expect him to just stand up and confront her right? with her having magic to cause explosions that can kill him on a whim?. The mc has done what he can to survive after being hunted by basically everyone everywhere. Its just the first 20 or so chapters that are hard to read because the mc is weak and all. but its gets better... MC its not really that smart in taking decisions but he improves later on.
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