i just cant bring myself to read past ch 3 when i read that apparently legendary and mythical pokemon are snacks any random trash can get and throw away like a dirty rag aka mc's "starter" zeraora (i skiped ch 2 since i wanted to see if the writing quality went up and see this) like are you serious?
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LIKEthe reviewer is right are you serious? aside from being a beta mc with a laughable goal you even made a trashy story to a legendary pokemon, what did you think a legendary pokemon are? a caterpie that can be found anywhere and can be thrown easily so your MC can get it? such a trashy concept
Azure_warrior:As for why Zeraora previous trainer thew her away was something meant to be discovered in the future.
some people will be really direct with their opinion. just look for why they complain and use that to improve the story. it's a major plothole to have someone having a legendary Pokemon and ditching it. no sane person will do that
Azure_warrior:Well, your review is little discouraging. I can't your opinion.
asaade:the reviewer is right are you serious? aside from being a beta mc with a laughable goal you even made a trashy story to a legendary pokemon, what did you think a legendary pokemon are? a caterpie that can be found anywhere and can be thrown easily so your MC can get it? such a trashy concept
I lost interest when I read the synapse. because all I needed to know is main character becomes best friends with Ash Ketchum and I knew exactly what type of Pokemon fanfic this is. as that told me that this is one of those trashy Pokemon fanfics where the main character becomes best friends with Ash and proceeds to try make Ash Ketchum a better Pokemon trainer while following him on his journey.
Nope Oak is the sect elder in here and Ash is the arrogant young master and almost sent mc into jail
funmaxwell:I lost interest when I read the synapse. because all I needed to know is main character becomes best friends with Ash Ketchum and I knew exactly what type of Pokemon fanfic this is. as that told me that this is one of those trashy Pokemon fanfics where the main character becomes best friends with Ash and proceeds to try make Ash Ketchum a better Pokemon trainer while following him on his journey.
You can't what his opinion? Understand? Im assuming that's what you're trying to say here. That you can't understand his opinion. Keep in mind this pokemon is within world as far as anyone knows is fully unique and already shares a bond so there should be little to no reason to leave it. Please at least watch the early pokemon anime seasons to understand the world a bit more. (theyre free atm if I recall correctly for the earlier anime seasons)
Azure_warrior:Well, your review is little discouraging. I can't your opinion.