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FableWardenLv13yr
2021-12-04 15:47

another mediocre story just like the 'My Vampire System' and I am sure it will be popular again coz that's the standard/bar for the readers of this platform. Had to drop this after reading some 30-40 chaps coz I just just couldn't get into the story. The quality that 99% of the novels here lack is 'Immersion' and that's the same for this novel too. Let's see of this review stands or will it be deleted to like the ones on MVS ! Delete it even if you want, I won't be bothered to give another review nor the story another chance.

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Devils_AdvocateLv13

I just don't get people like you. >_> First of all, this is a non-exclusive novel, so even if we wanted to, we are unable to delete any comments or take down any reviews. Now let's get to what you wrote. In what possible way do you yourself believe the 'review' you wrote is going to help anybody decide whether to read it or not? Not only have you pretty much insulted the average reader in your very first sentence, but the entire rest of your argument also boils down to; "I don't like it cause it's popular and I couldn't get immersed into it." It's unfortunate that this novel wasn't your cup of tea, but let's be real, since you knew that MVS wasn't to your liking, I dare to question whether you really ever gave MWS an actual chance. However, let's give you the benefit of the doubt and say that you read it while ignoring who wrote it and you came to the conclusion that you didn't like it, what was your point of 'warning' people to stay away? I, for one, am not a fan of romance or mecha stories, yet you don't see me run around and write negative reviews, when I should know full well that the target audience isn't me. That being said, I wish you luck in finding more novels like Author's POV and The Bored Immortal which you appear to have enjoyed.

Lord_EggieLv1

Ah, Devils_Advocate is the Editor, thats why. Certainly JKAce Manja Vibes

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Hidde_CroesLv11

Go look at Lord of Mysteries, one of the best written and well thought out novels i‘ve ever read here

Warrior2091Lv1

This review helped me decide how trash this novel is and I'm not regretting it. Its people like you who argue to every negative comment that they can't digest causing this novel to be overrated. True, he insulted but those were facts. I've read over 400 novels on WN and from my point of view it only deserves 2 star. I've been reading these reviews for a while and almost all the 5 star reviews are like :"😍😍😍😍😍" only emojis and no content on the plot ,at least this review is more detailed than the 5 star ones.

Devils_Advocate:I just don't get people like you. >_> First of all, this is a non-exclusive novel, so even if we wanted to, we are unable to delete any comments or take down any reviews. Now let's get to what you wrote. In what possible way do you yourself believe the 'review' you wrote is going to help anybody decide whether to read it or not? Not only have you pretty much insulted the average reader in your very first sentence, but the entire rest of your argument also boils down to; "I don't like it cause it's popular and I couldn't get immersed into it." It's unfortunate that this novel wasn't your cup of tea, but let's be real, since you knew that MVS wasn't to your liking, I dare to question whether you really ever gave MWS an actual chance. However, let's give you the benefit of the doubt and say that you read it while ignoring who wrote it and you came to the conclusion that you didn't like it, what was your point of 'warning' people to stay away? I, for one, am not a fan of romance or mecha stories, yet you don't see me run around and write negative reviews, when I should know full well that the target audience isn't me. That being said, I wish you luck in finding more novels like Author's POV and The Bored Immortal which you appear to have enjoyed.
Devils_AdvocateLv13

I'm sure people would find it more believable if you used your main account to leave this reply, instead of this throwaway account, which has literally been created just today, and only to post this one comment ;) But you do have a point, I should make a review myself once we hit 300 =3

Warrior2091:This review helped me decide how trash this novel is and I'm not regretting it. Its people like you who argue to every negative comment that they can't digest causing this novel to be overrated. True, he insulted but those were facts. I've read over 400 novels on WN and from my point of view it only deserves 2 star. I've been reading these reviews for a while and almost all the 5 star reviews are like :"😍😍😍😍😍" only emojis and no content on the plot ,at least this review is more detailed than the 5 star ones.
UndeadBeingLv12

Created an alt😂😂😂😂 and you said you’ve read 400 books 1 comment!!! The audacity on you is about as much as my entire internet comments and that’s saying alot

Warrior2091:This review helped me decide how trash this novel is and I'm not regretting it. Its people like you who argue to every negative comment that they can't digest causing this novel to be overrated. True, he insulted but those were facts. I've read over 400 novels on WN and from my point of view it only deserves 2 star. I've been reading these reviews for a while and almost all the 5 star reviews are like :"😍😍😍😍😍" only emojis and no content on the plot ,at least this review is more detailed than the 5 star ones.
ForceReconLv1

Now that I know it's the MVS Author I'm gonna skip it, that dude has no idea how character growth works, Quinn was born a weak, spineless MC unable to make decisions by himself and remained like that for well over 1400 chapters. Author also has some kind of pain and suffering fetish, like he doesn't know what to do with the story so he just makes his MC suffer for stupid reasons or none at all.

DireLifeLv13

Lol yeah I felt a little of that too. I could have dealt with it better if SOMETHING went right for any of the main characters. But no, you have to make everything depressing by having the characters keep secrets from each other and NOT share CRUCIAL information just to progress the plot. Pretty much every author has their quirks that someone doesn't like. You can't make everyone happy. I was actually on JKS's patreon for a while but stopped paying. Its a once a year payment so its a pretty high initial payment that doesn't account for vacations or events throughout the year. JKS just didn't upload for half the year so I gave up on that.

ForceRecon:Now that I know it's the MVS Author I'm gonna skip it, that dude has no idea how character growth works, Quinn was born a weak, spineless MC unable to make decisions by himself and remained like that for well over 1400 chapters. Author also has some kind of pain and suffering fetish, like he doesn't know what to do with the story so he just makes his MC suffer for stupid reasons or none at all.
Dexter_Sled_1111Lv13

How is it detailed? he didn't state anything about the story at all. I read it and liked it, don't know why you guys don't like it.Also, he mentioned 'Another mediocre story by jksmanga' so clearly he didn't like the author.Just go somewhere else, i don't know why you readers would waste your time giving hateful reviews. if you think you can write something better I challenge you.

Warrior2091:This review helped me decide how trash this novel is and I'm not regretting it. Its people like you who argue to every negative comment that they can't digest causing this novel to be overrated. True, he insulted but those were facts. I've read over 400 novels on WN and from my point of view it only deserves 2 star. I've been reading these reviews for a while and almost all the 5 star reviews are like :"😍😍😍😍😍" only emojis and no content on the plot ,at least this review is more detailed than the 5 star ones.
crystal_06Lv14

I'm sure you drop this kind of comment and review on every book you didn't like.. you are a coward and hypocrite... move on to other novels if this isn't to you liking.. one man's food is another's poison...

MrJOKELv2

y are y'all crazy insulting mvs and what's wrong with the mvs author the guy is great y are u guys dissing him... I'm not sure u guys have taste

ForceRecon:Now that I know it's the MVS Author I'm gonna skip it, that dude has no idea how character growth works, Quinn was born a weak, spineless MC unable to make decisions by himself and remained like that for well over 1400 chapters. Author also has some kind of pain and suffering fetish, like he doesn't know what to do with the story so he just makes his MC suffer for stupid reasons or none at all.
MrJOKELv2

Yh bruh he couldn't even make a bed time story

Dexter_Sled_1111:How is it detailed? he didn't state anything about the story at all. I read it and liked it, don't know why you guys don't like it.Also, he mentioned 'Another mediocre story by jksmanga' so clearly he didn't like the author.Just go somewhere else, i don't know why you readers would waste your time giving hateful reviews. if you think you can write something better I challenge you.
Bright_WolfsonLv14

Mtsww

Chris_Henderson_0998Lv11

Yeah I was stuck between believing the author was conveying immaturity in the characters (since most are young and dumb) or if he just needed them to be as a plot device. I’m still really enjoying the book but I share some of you’re criticism.

DireLife:Lol yeah I felt a little of that too. I could have dealt with it better if SOMETHING went right for any of the main characters. But no, you have to make everything depressing by having the characters keep secrets from each other and NOT share CRUCIAL information just to progress the plot. Pretty much every author has their quirks that someone doesn't like. You can't make everyone happy. I was actually on JKS's patreon for a while but stopped paying. Its a once a year payment so its a pretty high initial payment that doesn't account for vacations or events throughout the year. JKS just didn't upload for half the year so I gave up on that.
YoungCreatorLv4

Why? 😑

Type_ShiLv2

hv u ever given MVS a chance. The only reason i even started reading Webnovel and even have dreams of writing a novel is bcuz of MVS. It was the first novel i ever read and that's why i got hooked. You can keep your opinions to yourself but don't deter new readers

A_Meza_13Lv14

I’m like on chapter 400 something and I’m like literally feeling like I’m part of their group and you say it lacks immersion. Oh my goodness it just doesn’t make sense what you’re saying right now.

CraigDR20Lv13

These sorts of reviews are beyond me, too. I have a high level of education and...I get pretty engrossed in his works. Something is obviously lacking in ones life to try to degrade others like this.

Devils_Advocate:I just don't get people like you. >_> First of all, this is a non-exclusive novel, so even if we wanted to, we are unable to delete any comments or take down any reviews. Now let's get to what you wrote. In what possible way do you yourself believe the 'review' you wrote is going to help anybody decide whether to read it or not? Not only have you pretty much insulted the average reader in your very first sentence, but the entire rest of your argument also boils down to; "I don't like it cause it's popular and I couldn't get immersed into it." It's unfortunate that this novel wasn't your cup of tea, but let's be real, since you knew that MVS wasn't to your liking, I dare to question whether you really ever gave MWS an actual chance. However, let's give you the benefit of the doubt and say that you read it while ignoring who wrote it and you came to the conclusion that you didn't like it, what was your point of 'warning' people to stay away? I, for one, am not a fan of romance or mecha stories, yet you don't see me run around and write negative reviews, when I should know full well that the target audience isn't me. That being said, I wish you luck in finding more novels like Author's POV and The Bored Immortal which you appear to have enjoyed.
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