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MGStarFire
MGStarFireLv43yr
2022-01-21 23:11

At the beggining i thought this story was just a copy paste of teen wolf but it's not. Teen wolf was a lot better than this. Seriously, am i the only one that thinks that the plot is too slow moving and the story is boring, i guess it's my fault since i expected more action and excitment but the author should have put tags in place so readers can know what to expect.

My Werewolf System

JKSManga
4.4
1262 Chs

Liked by 27 people

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JKSManga
JKSMangaLv14

Hey sorry to hear about that. If you don't mind, do you mind telling me what chapter you got up to? Just so I can get a feel for when you dropped the series. Just because there is a lot of action and fighting, just a lot of build-up in the beginning until later down the line. Just like with a lot of my works, Build up, System worry, Drama, then all the action starts Also, this is a non-exclusive work so unable to put tags on Non exclusive. Thank you for your feedback

3yr
11
Wandering_Soul_UwU
Wandering_Soul_UwULv14

Well…

JKSManga:Hey sorry to hear about that. If you don't mind, do you mind telling me what chapter you got up to? Just so I can get a feel for when you dropped the series. Just because there is a lot of action and fighting, just a lot of build-up in the beginning until later down the line. Just like with a lot of my works, Build up, System worry, Drama, then all the action starts Also, this is a non-exclusive work so unable to put tags on Non exclusive. Thank you for your feedback
3yr
2
MGStarFire
MGStarFireLv4

no problem, sorry if i was harsh but i had really high hopes for this and i was dissapointed i got up to chapter 60 and stopped, it was going too slow

JKSManga:Hey sorry to hear about that. If you don't mind, do you mind telling me what chapter you got up to? Just so I can get a feel for when you dropped the series. Just because there is a lot of action and fighting, just a lot of build-up in the beginning until later down the line. Just like with a lot of my works, Build up, System worry, Drama, then all the action starts Also, this is a non-exclusive work so unable to put tags on Non exclusive. Thank you for your feedback
3yr
3
JKSManga
JKSMangaLv14

No that makes sense this was actually written for Amazon not webnovel so the pacing isn't like webnovels, so after the first like section it picks up speed which is like chapter 100 and something

MGStarFire:no problem, sorry if i was harsh but i had really high hopes for this and i was dissapointed i got up to chapter 60 and stopped, it was going too slow
3yr
5
ZhQn
ZhQnLv1

I don't know where else to write. but "Lockdown" is related to MVS, or to your other work?

3yr
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JKSManga
JKSMangaLv14

Hey Guys author of My vampire system here. This is my Third system book! Set in Modern day time , based around underground fighting and gang crime. This is under a non exclusive contract so had to upload on a different account

3yr

social_vegan09
social_vegan09Lv3

MVS is still one of my best reads and jks is already an expert for giving his readers a cliffhanger after every chapter.Now it's time to start a new system book!!!!

3yr
Bird_Of_Paradise
Bird_Of_ParadiseLv4

MVS is one of my top book so I have had wanted to read this for quite some time and voila....Its finally in WN!! And I love the start haha🤣🤣quite diff from MVS's start🤡

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FableWarden
FableWardenLv1

another mediocre story just like the 'My Vampire System' and I am sure it will be popular again coz that's the standard/bar for the readers of this platform. Had to drop this after reading some 30-40 chaps coz I just just couldn't get into the story. The quality that 99% of the novels here lack is 'Immersion' and that's the same for this novel too. Let's see of this review stands or will it be deleted to like the ones on MVS ! Delete it even if you want, I won't be bothered to give another review nor the story another chance.

3yr
ResidentialPsycho
ResidentialPsychoLv15

This is a sci-fi/action series where characters have the opportunity to evolve using special serums and mutate with traits of other animal creatures for combat. Society is largely ruled by gangs, and not just anyone can live just anywhere. The main character himself is a gangster, but this isn’t explored fully. Although he has a family, there has been little world building or time spent with his family members or at his home, so he comes across as a rather shallow character. The other characters suffer from lack of depth as well, and they are quite forgettable. My Vampire System has a similar problem with character depth and making readers feel emotionally attached to and sympathetic toward the characters of the series, but it’s even worse here. The character designs are overall quite weak and forgettable. The story development largely makes sense so far, although not too much has happened yet. Some of the characters don’t make the most logical choices, especially the main character, but neither do real people. Even when there are some clearly important and critical things for the main character to explore, such as experimenting with his physique or testing out his abilities, he ignores these things altogether. He doesn’t make the wisest choices, and some of the planning in the plot is odd but may make sense later on. The world background is in desperate need of being filled up and shown, not told. Although some details have been explained to the readers, little has been shown to them to let them experience this world through the senses of the main character or other characters. This series could improve in quality dramatically by fleshing out the world and characters themselves. Although this is a series about werewolves, it’s clear by this point that the author didn’t do any research on wolves themselves due to obvious errors in describing wolves’ behaviors. If you’re here because you like wolves, then you will be disappointed. If you are here for werewolves and not the animal they’re based on, then you may still enjoy the series. If you are here for wolves and want to learn more about wolves by reading this series, then you should make a hasty retreat. Overall, some people may still like this series, but I don’t like it’s worth spending spirit stones or fast passes on with its current level of writing. That said, the writer could dramatically improve the quality of his series by trying to build the world and characters more.

3yr
sijispraseeth
sijispraseethLv4

I feel like I'm reading tern wolf. I just started reading the book but it's similar to teen wolf in lot of ways i hope in later chapters it will change.

3yr
EnavoiG
EnavoiGLv12

the author doesn't even have the ability to put the tags that the novel has... you can already know that it will be a mid-level novel... Sigh

3yr
Almighty_Chaos
Almighty_ChaosLv3

another disappointing novel by jks manga it looks like you have lost your touch with how bad you novels MC characters are being created ...I have to say except from dragon system the rest have not been up to the task maybe you should try stand up comedy bro

3yr
Jay_Corbitt_0777
Jay_Corbitt_0777Lv14

I’m sorry, ot seems like a great book but no one, and I mean NO ONE, is that dense or stupid. It just completely lost me. I get trying to create a story but it really just feels forced.

3yr
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