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sijispraseeth
sijispraseethLv43yr
2021-11-22 19:40

I feel like I'm reading tern wolf. I just started reading the book but it's similar to teen wolf in lot of ways i hope in later chapters it will change.

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Renexq_2
Renexq_2Lv3

MVS is still one of my best reads and jks is already an expert for giving his readers a cliffhanger after every chapter.Now it's time to start a new system book!!!!

Devils_Advocate
Devils_AdvocateLv13

Are you still with us or not? Haven't watched Teen Wolf, but seeing as MWS and TW both seem to be about teenagers who suddenly? become werewolves and are confronted with the benefits and detriments that entails, I wouldn't be surprised if there were many similarities.

AlphaHost
AlphaHostLv11

I'ts not just many similarities. Honestly you can clearly tell he watched teen wolf then decided to write this. Nerdy best friend who knows abouts werewofles, new hot girl just moved to town, a couple other similarities and the way the story flows in the beginning is so clearly taken from teen wolf you cant help get a dejavu from it. I cant tell to much as a couldent keep reading it anymore, but from what i did read its not just similarities its almost a copy atleast in the beginning

Devils_Advocate:Are you still with us or not? Haven't watched Teen Wolf, but seeing as MWS and TW both seem to be about teenagers who suddenly? become werewolves and are confronted with the benefits and detriments that entails, I wouldn't be surprised if there were many similarities.
Devils_Advocate
Devils_AdvocateLv13

You just described Tropes 😅

AlphaHost:I'ts not just many similarities. Honestly you can clearly tell he watched teen wolf then decided to write this. Nerdy best friend who knows abouts werewofles, new hot girl just moved to town, a couple other similarities and the way the story flows in the beginning is so clearly taken from teen wolf you cant help get a dejavu from it. I cant tell to much as a couldent keep reading it anymore, but from what i did read its not just similarities its almost a copy atleast in the beginning
AlphaHost
AlphaHostLv11

yea, i might have explained tropes, problem is he has written it too similar to teen wolf. thats the main issue not the tropes but the way he wrote those tropes into the novel.

Devils_Advocate:You just described Tropes 😅
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