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EnavoiG
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2021-11-05 09:51

the author doesn't even have the ability to put the tags that the novel has... you can already know that it will be a mid-level novel... Sigh

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JKSManga
JKSMangaLv14

Tags are not available for non Exclusive novels, which this one is, you can see on my other works through this account I have tags on my novels

Octopus_Megas
Octopus_MegasLv1

There is a novel, called Think out of the box. You're a writer. Can you read this?

JKSManga:Tags are not available for non Exclusive novels, which this one is, you can see on my other works through this account I have tags on my novels
Shark_Deepwater
Shark_DeepwaterLv1

You will like Think out of the box! This is the story about a cruel magus messiah and kind outcast. About the magic and the technology.

JKSManga:Tags are not available for non Exclusive novels, which this one is, you can see on my other works through this account I have tags on my novels
Mzku
MzkuLv11

I went to your actual website and there's still no tags for this novel. They are important. I think you should list tags. Also, i see plenty of novels on here where they cannot list tags so they add them directly at the bottom of the summary. Please be sure to add tags to your works.

JKSManga:Tags are not available for non Exclusive novels, which this one is, you can see on my other works through this account I have tags on my novels
HelValkyrja
HelValkyrjaLv2

Hi, I would appreciate it if you check out my new novel ABOMINATION, really value the support by following and critiques. The first three chapters set it🤩

Mzku:I went to your actual website and there's still no tags for this novel. They are important. I think you should list tags. Also, i see plenty of novels on here where they cannot list tags so they add them directly at the bottom of the summary. Please be sure to add tags to your works.
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