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Because it makes the MC feel passive, it’s fine to use the system the fanfic is based upon, but there needs to be a balance where the MC contributes in unique ways or shows personal growth beyond just relying on others.

and what spending 20 days looking for a needle in a massive heystack? where the deus ex machina would simply grant him the luck of encountering one? nah prefer this, much more reasonable

The setup with "God Reincarnation Inc." stuff is interesting, but it feels like it goes on too long and doesn’t add much to the main plot. Since it doesn’t seem to impact the story later, it might be worth shortening or summarizing this section. Jumping right into the protagonist’s arrival in the new world with their powers could hook readers faster and keep the pacing tight. Instead of having all the setup in the beginning, genrelly this lengthy introudctions kinda just becomes boring, hell might be wrong but 99% of fanfics that does this introoduction never has any payoff anyway and made me loose intrest in reading more. Good luck

You can exercise as a child, however trainning like heavy weightlifting, HIT trainning and other excersises that push the body untill the limit should wait untill 16-18 depending on the excercise. basicallly you can train just dont go to a gym and start bodybuilding, running marathon and shit like that before you have finished your development.

too be fair this is the blue silver emperor, not normal silver grass, its like comparing a house cat to a lion. blue silver emperor has far more leeway in what path to choose

right.... I am ''shocked'' too find most information says you are full of bullshit, here is a few. American Psychological Association (APA) The APA has consistently stated that no scientific research supports the claim that gay men or lesbians are more likely to molest children than heterosexuals. The APA's website includes a page on Sexual Orientation and Homosexuality which addresses this misconception. Child Molestation Research & Prevention Institute According to data from the Child Molestation Research & Prevention Institute, 90% of child molesters identify as heterosexual males. Their findings show that the vast majority of child abusers are not homosexual. You can explore further at their website or via other prevention resources. Journal of the American Medical Association (JAMA) A study published in JAMA revealed that the overwhelming majority of male perpetrators of child abuse identify as heterosexual. This study supports the evidence that pedophilia is unrelated to sexual orientation. You can find more information on research through platforms like PubMed, an official repository for medical studies. Gregory M. Herek, Ph.D. Dr. Herek, a professor at the University of California, has published several peer-reviewed studies debunking the myth that homosexuals are more likely to be child molesters. His research can be found on his website and in various academic publications.

Where on earth did you get the idea that Dumbledore's sexuality has anything to do with his role in the story or his authority at Hogwarts? His leadership, decisions, and actions have zero connection to his sexual orientation, and bringing it up like that just shows a complete lack of understanding of both the character and the series. Maybe focus on the actual plot instead of projecting some bizarre agenda onto a fictional headmaster, you moron.

depends on if you somehow have feelings for them, cheating is cheating.

Honestly dumbeldoor is a good man. At his core, Dumbledore is haunted by his past mistakes (notably his relationship with Gellert Grindelwald) and is trying to atone by ensuring that no one else rises to the level of tyranny that Grindelwald or Voldemort did. However, in doing so, he takes a distant, strategic approach, sometimes forgetting the emotional toll it takes on the people he cares about, particularly Harry. The prophecy has a massive impact on Dumbledore’s decisions throughout the series. His knowledge of it leads him to take actions that are often morally ambiguous, manipulative, or seemingly passive. He is willing to risk Harry’s life and the lives of others because he believes the prophecy must be fulfilled for the greater good, and only Harry can defeat Voldemort. Honestly Dumbeldore is a man haunted by two wars wich has turned him into the man he is today filled with regrets and willing to anything for a better tomorrow. Dumbedore may be many things but incompetent and evil is not one of them. He is a morally gray character who operates from a place of good intentions but is willing to make sacrifices and questionable choices to achieve his goals.