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2022-01-08 07:35

It some personal dislike but first guy recive quest to some push-ups and so on, he have no trained body at all but he with his will do 100 of them somehow(it even written that 20 push-ups was his limit that get him weak arms) why not 10000 in the first time if his will only matter ? But it not worst thing, he trained and got some stats growed passively, and after one training he finished quest and got rewarded he got some stat points and he spend it all, why? Man have 15 years of new life experience that he spent By playing games he does not ask about drowbacks of it, will it limit stat growing in the furure or some of that thigs, btw man know about novels with and systems from previous life so he must think of it first. Is he stupid or just have some brain damage or he can not think about future grow idk. As i said probably personal dislike, i think mc is stupid.

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Suzune_Simp
Suzune_SimpLv11

I also don't like stupid MCs. Thank you for sacrificing your braincells for the future readers

ILoveNovels
ILoveNovelsLv11

Look, to be honest, I reread your comment about 10 times and I still can't understand what the problem was with him investing the stat points

Bods_Linds
Bods_LindsLv10

he had hit no bottleneck he was still growing at a fast rate its better to use when u cant grow as fast or in danger

ILoveNovels:Look, to be honest, I reread your comment about 10 times and I still can't understand what the problem was with him investing the stat points
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