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Freelancerok
FreelancerokLv43yr
2021-11-18 23:27

I expected something better from a hero who was in the past the strongest in his world and who clearly survived his period of maturity. But how wrong I was when the main character behaves almost like all the heroes of issekai. Of course, they explained to us a little that he was changing, but why didn't he want to control it? And he behaves like a rag with his first acquaintance Lucas, maybe many people see friendship this way? I see it's different and it's difficult for me to read such an attitude. In short, I personally do not like this book yet. (The review was done using Google).

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The_cone
The_coneLv12

I guess I see where your coming from, but his personality gets way better, in my opinion. It also explains his ‘childish’ behavior that some people don’t like but his personality will grow on you and it strays away from that cliche cold, calculating mc that gets boring way too quick. Anyways, don’t let something minor stop you from reading….there are plenty of laughs that await you

Tsol_3785
Tsol_3785Lv11

can you recommend me some novels of cold, calculative mc

The_cone:I guess I see where your coming from, but his personality gets way better, in my opinion. It also explains his ‘childish’ behavior that some people don’t like but his personality will grow on you and it strays away from that cliche cold, calculating mc that gets boring way too quick. Anyways, don’t let something minor stop you from reading….there are plenty of laughs that await you
Ouroboros001
Ouroboros001Lv12

Personally there's behavior that some might consider childish, but it's really just personality that cannot be changed. I'm okay with that. Then there's childish that's a phase you see kids go through that can and often is grown out of. If this is an adult man that's acting like a chuuni I could see how you'd be upset. And as far as friendship goes I've always viewed it as a two way street. Sometimes you can give way more back to your friends than they can, but down road that can change. Though certainly someone who doesn't care about you and just wants to use you up is not a friend. I cannot tell from your review if any of this is the case because you are too vague.

Shofi96
Shofi96Lv4

Have u tried Reverend Insanity??

Tsol_3785:can you recommend me some novels of cold, calculative mc
Disfigured
DisfiguredLv11

I don't know if my definition of cold and calculate mc matches with yours but here are some of the novels that I recommend reverend insanity, re: evolution online(calculative), birth of the demonic sword(he killed many innocents so I think he is cold ...maybe?)

Tsol_3785:can you recommend me some novels of cold, calculative mc
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