Author Update - I have looked at my previous chapters until 40, and I gotta admit that some parts were slightly amateurish and badly written, but chapters from 40 start getting better, I promise. I have written quite a lot of drafts, up to 70 chapter already and it keeps increasing and a lot of interesting things are happening in the life of Ichiro, even I, as a writer I am honestly surprised of the things I wrote and I think most of you will enjoy it, so please read at least up to 50, because a lot of interesting things start happening after it, and if you still don't like the novel, then you should prob it because this novel isn't probably for your taste then. Thanks for readind and I hope you will enjoy.
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Did you improve or edited the first 40 chapters?
i kinda dont like the fact that afte age 45 you cant get stronger no matter what and also it doesnt make sense how after 45 you cant get stronger cus as you get stronger you should technically be able to live longer and thus prolonging their peak
I think they mighg be able to overcome It once they reach martial divinity
we need more chapters or bonus chapter, cliffhanger is killing me author
chapters are getting wayy to short, author way to much cliffhanger hangers might let people quit reading your book. of course not future readers that is.
is it harem or single
Its single love
in first 40 Ch , especially 15-40 in tournament MC is too childish. MC is 45 year old , those joke is so lame that it makes me annoyed. does Mc personality become more mature in following chapter? because if not I will drop the story , not my type.
couldn5 u have left the elf lover...i loved that idea
Ok let’s talk about azura SUPER CLINGY & yandere side he has to write a diary explaining his actions… and he is ok with it come on author san that’s jus not right where is his pride
some parts were very amateurish and badly written*
Yeah, I don't like it either. At the early chapters, it is mentioned that the scientists are finding a cure for someone who has gone through "Age of Deterioration".
Wish you would have included the elf girl.😔
It's harem now😭😭
I stopped cuz it became a harem I can barely bear romance but harem? Never!!!!!!!
She is not included? Then is it a harem or not If it's not I'll continue the novel
Author sama please till me If this is a harem or not I'm at ch174 but I don't want to waste my time if it's a harem
It's not harem. Check the note at the beginning of ch 223.
The elf girl will become Azura's best friend, not Ichiro's lover....
thx I can now continue reading it
