it's gud to know an Indian based novel in this app......I hope to see more chapters of this novel and also waiting for an interesting plot....

Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel

I am amazed and excited upon the fact that someone is willing to write an Indian history and that too by being Transmigrated as one of the heirs of the Great Vijaya Nagara Empire I hope you will not abandon this

Good story idea👍👍. I hope you will make the king more ruthless 👹👹to enemies and majestic as it is a medivial type of period and do not make it democratic only in The 17 the century. Also, try to let Mc participate in wars to develop a little warrior 🗡️🗡️personality also not only scholarly 👨‍🏫👨‍🏫type. Also in the story Mc is a king not a civil servant so he should not feel embarrassing when his subjects bow to him. Being overly kind to subjects will make them easily make selfish arguments and rebellion for power

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Bro why did mc ban Gurukuls ? Isn't Vijaynagar a Hindu empire ? In his own empire, the mc cannot openly preach Hinduism. He had to stop other educational institution like churches etc to stops birth of foreign ideas and conversion but why gurukuls . And there is no proper explanation of education system. And there is no equality or secularism in 16 th century so that you have to do everything equal for Muslims also. Gurukuls were important parts of Hindu culture and you shut them down . I thing you are just colonising India like British only introducing foreign ideas. Now you will also start introducing ing Muslims in admiration also . Many still are not loyal to India in today's time and you are expecting them to be loyal in that time. Plz restart the gurukuls and place on restrictions on communities n harmful for empire. You don't have to worry over equality . You are not in peaceful timewhere you have to to introduce equal policies for all people. You are the king of an empire who have to expand empire either by force or peace and expel all anti Hindu people. Not please them on terms of equality like today's times . If the mcs cannot tolerate bloodshed give the control to other king and only act as a minister. In that time when Muslims rulers commit atrocities on non Muslims, you cannot win over people by peaceful means, mercy and without bloodshed. You have to be cruel to spill innocent blood also. Plz reply

Just because you dare to write about ancient India. Here my five Star Review.No more words need....As suggestions can be given in chapter paragraphs too.Keep it up author 👍🐱

Hey good story idea 👌.but there are some problems . You are just straight introducing reforms in every ch .Story is about india not Vijaynagar empire . You start a thing in a ch but do not show the consequences it has and there is no continuity in it . The king is harming the interests of the nobles and the nobles do not do anything and just sit. If it was the in reality , 😑 he would have been assassinated🗡️ in 2 months. Also the truth is that an empire is not formed by fairness and do not talk about equality in 17th century. And even in today's era there is no equality. On one side the British and Mughals are aggressively transforming Hindus and you want to give fairness to all Muslims(no grudge) .I am not talking about just killing people of other religions .Reforms should be slowly applied and not suddenly. He is just a newly crowned king and does not have enough prestige. Medicinal kingdoms do not work on justice but ⚔️.

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