Hey good story idea 👌.but there are some problems . You are just straight introducing reforms in every ch .Story is about india not Vijaynagar empire . You start a thing in a ch but do not show the consequences it has and there is no continuity in it . The king is harming the interests of the nobles and the nobles do not do anything and just sit. If it was the in reality , 😑 he would have been assassinated🗡️ in 2 months. Also the truth is that an empire is not formed by fairness and do not talk about equality in 17th century. And even in today's era there is no equality. On one side the British and Mughals are aggressively transforming Hindus and you want to give fairness to all Muslims(no grudge) .I am not talking about just killing people of other religions .Reforms should be slowly applied and not suddenly. He is just a newly crowned king and does not have enough prestige. Medicinal kingdoms do not work on justice but ⚔️.
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This is just my view and no excessive criticism or hate
And I find it funny to make a scientist as king . He does not know anything about history in depth and want to rule based on 21th century . He is very naive . The story lacks depth.
Thanks For the review, and I accept ur point of Nobles not doing anything, You would have known their side of their story in the next few chapters.
