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Chirashu_Jindal_4107
Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv21yr
2023-08-13 14:24

Good story idea👍👍. I hope you will make the king more ruthless 👹👹to enemies and majestic as it is a medivial type of period and do not make it democratic only in The 17 the century. Also, try to let Mc participate in wars to develop a little warrior 🗡️🗡️personality also not only scholarly 👨‍🏫👨‍🏫type. Also in the story Mc is a king not a civil servant so he should not feel embarrassing when his subjects bow to him. Being overly kind to subjects will make them easily make selfish arguments and rebellion for power

Reborn In 17th century India with Black Technology

Mithun_ReddyGaru
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Chirashu_Jindal_4107
Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv2

Also don't make him a easy going King 👑 and beta type of character

1yr
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Chirashu_Jindal_4107
Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv2

His enemies should fear him

1yr
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Mithun_ReddyGaru
Mithun_ReddyGaruAuthor

Thank you for your input. As part of my plan, I intended to let him make the mistake in order to help him grasp the reality that the strong often dominate the weak. This development will unfold in the upcoming chapters.

1yr
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Chirashu_Jindal_4107
Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv2

Bro you should take ideas from Chanakya arthshastra for warfare(not only physical but psychological war ) and not only copy techniques from modern world . You are writing about india. If you just implement all the foreign ideas in the kingdom and not something from Indian culture and wire something new, the book will just become a wish fulfilment type of Novel

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knight_rider_2000
knight_rider_2000Lv14

brother it's a very good novel just upload frequently and beware of copyright issue as we have recently seen what happened when "the rise of Australia" (banned on web novel) when it became popular. show us a good time for the first time I have seen a proper edited novel on India. And you can gather information and plot building aspects from the above mentioned novel and the tyrant of steel, it's a good novel. Thank you for giving a new start to Indian rise novels.

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DaoistpirqtQ
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I am amazed and excited upon the fact that someone is willing to write an Indian history and that too by being Transmigrated as one of the heirs of the Great Vijaya Nagara Empire I hope you will not abandon this

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TREEHOUSE
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Chirashu_Jindal
Chirashu_JindalLv4

Bro why did mc ban Gurukuls ? Isn't Vijaynagar a Hindu empire ? In his own empire, the mc cannot openly preach Hinduism. He had to stop other educational institution like churches etc to stops birth of foreign ideas and conversion but why gurukuls . And there is no proper explanation of education system. And there is no equality or secularism in 16 th century so that you have to do everything equal for Muslims also. Gurukuls were important parts of Hindu culture and you shut them down . I thing you are just colonising India like British only introducing foreign ideas. Now you will also start introducing ing Muslims in admiration also . Many still are not loyal to India in today's time and you are expecting them to be loyal in that time. Plz restart the gurukuls and place on restrictions on communities n harmful for empire. You don't have to worry over equality . You are not in peaceful timewhere you have to to introduce equal policies for all people. You are the king of an empire who have to expand empire either by force or peace and expel all anti Hindu people. Not please them on terms of equality like today's times . If the mcs cannot tolerate bloodshed give the control to other king and only act as a minister. In that time when Muslims rulers commit atrocities on non Muslims, you cannot win over people by peaceful means, mercy and without bloodshed. You have to be cruel to spill innocent blood also. Plz reply

1yr
Guardian_Of_Nexus
Guardian_Of_NexusLv4

Just because you dare to write about ancient India. Here my five Star Review.No more words need....As suggestions can be given in chapter paragraphs too.Keep it up author 👍🐱

1yr
John_Grace
John_GraceLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Chirashu_Jindal_4107
Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv2

Hey good story idea 👌.but there are some problems . You are just straight introducing reforms in every ch .Story is about india not Vijaynagar empire . You start a thing in a ch but do not show the consequences it has and there is no continuity in it . The king is harming the interests of the nobles and the nobles do not do anything and just sit. If it was the in reality , 😑 he would have been assassinated🗡️ in 2 months. Also the truth is that an empire is not formed by fairness and do not talk about equality in 17th century. And even in today's era there is no equality. On one side the British and Mughals are aggressively transforming Hindus and you want to give fairness to all Muslims(no grudge) .I am not talking about just killing people of other religions .Reforms should be slowly applied and not suddenly. He is just a newly crowned king and does not have enough prestige. Medicinal kingdoms do not work on justice but ⚔️.

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