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Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv21yr
2023-08-13 14:24

Good story idea👍👍. I hope you will make the king more ruthless 👹👹to enemies and majestic as it is a medivial type of period and do not make it democratic only in The 17 the century. Also, try to let Mc participate in wars to develop a little warrior 🗡️🗡️personality also not only scholarly 👨‍🏫👨‍🏫type. Also in the story Mc is a king not a civil servant so he should not feel embarrassing when his subjects bow to him. Being overly kind to subjects will make them easily make selfish arguments and rebellion for power

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv2

Also don't make him a easy going King 👑 and beta type of character

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Chirashu_Jindal_4107Lv2

His enemies should fear him

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Thank you for your input. As part of my plan, I intended to let him make the mistake in order to help him grasp the reality that the strong often dominate the weak. This development will unfold in the upcoming chapters.

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