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YummyNum
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2021-10-17 10:32

Honestly, I expected good things from this novel based on it's score and ranking. But it was extremely disappointing. İnfo dumps, extreme lack of character development, slow plot progression, meaningles dialogues etc. I read around 50 chapters, Idk if it's get any better, but those chapters were enough for me to drop this. Grammar is not bad and novel has some potential if thsese issues handled well but for now, very disappointing.

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YummyNum
YummyNumLv3

I will update this review if I read any further but for now I lost all interest.

Entrail_JI
Entrail_JIAuthor

That's fair. Actually, if you look at the reviews everyone shares a similar opinion to you with regards to the first 50 chaps. If you have time I suggest you try to read up to 71 (all the free chaps) and then let me know if you still feel the same way. btw, I'm only suggesting and not forcing you to read. Regarding info dumps, I did say this in the *read before reading novel* So if you're like super bored, I do hope you give it another shot as people tell me that 60+ is where it gets interesting. You are free to not do so as I too understand the struggles of reading something boring Good luck my g

YummyNum
YummyNumLv3

Okay, I am a little burnt out right now, I will probably continue this at some point when I have time, I will update the review at that time. I hope you don't lose motivation bcz of this review, I think the novel has potential, it jsut didn't clcik with me. Well, I just read 50 chapters or something so ıdk maybe it gets much better later on.

Entrail_JI:That's fair. Actually, if you look at the reviews everyone shares a similar opinion to you with regards to the first 50 chaps. If you have time I suggest you try to read up to 71 (all the free chaps) and then let me know if you still feel the same way. btw, I'm only suggesting and not forcing you to read. Regarding info dumps, I did say this in the *read before reading novel* So if you're like super bored, I do hope you give it another shot as people tell me that 60+ is where it gets interesting. You are free to not do so as I too understand the struggles of reading something boring Good luck my g
Raoul_Nahimana
Raoul_NahimanaLv1

Honestly info dump was kinda necessary and also I think you lack time to read this well because by ch 70 we got alot of character development from around everyone like he changes are visible to avoid spoilers I suggest you take time

WHDB
WHDBLv1

honestly, how can u say that, I love this novel it's my favorite you didn't even read the whole thing yet and u are complaining

WHDB
WHDBLv1

of course, the author is doing better with plots and everything u should continue read it

YummyNum:Okay, I am a little burnt out right now, I will probably continue this at some point when I have time, I will update the review at that time. I hope you don't lose motivation bcz of this review, I think the novel has potential, it jsut didn't clcik with me. Well, I just read 50 chapters or something so ıdk maybe it gets much better later on.
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