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TofSpades
TofSpadesLv33yr
2021-07-08 12:06

I'm gonna be completely honest here, this book has POTENTIAL! Author I'm not tryna gas you up but this book is GOOD. There were barely any flaws, maybe one or two mistakes but overall it was great. The structure of the writing was clear and concise and the writing quality wasn't bad either. The idea of reincarnating into your own novel sounds cool af! It kinda reminded me of Omniscient reader's Viewpoint but this was with a twist. Great job author, try to up your stability of updates and I promise you this book will blow! A definite 5 stars from me. Keep it up!

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JoJo_Soni
JoJo_SoniLv4

read novel's extra. you will like it. i think this is the novel which inspired the trope of author getting transmigrated into his own book.

Daoistskf5VJ
Daoistskf5VJLv1

Editor is the novels extra, Same concept but now the editor is an extra could also have been a inspiration for this novel is gud too .

Nightshade102
Nightshade102Lv12

That's right it is an almost perfect book!! It hardly has any problems with it!!

Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

what's the sauce for the picture

TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3

Katekyo hitman reborn.

Solomolecule:what's the sauce for the picture
Solomolecule
SolomoleculeLv14

the one with the baby mafia dude?

TofSpades:Katekyo hitman reborn.
daoist_KoOlAiD
daoist_KoOlAiDLv14

yeah, I rec it but it gets weird towards the end (good weird for me tho)

Solomolecule:the one with the baby mafia dude?
Shin_Chan_5334
Shin_Chan_5334Lv4

Is the level of misunderstanding troupe as bad as it was in novel's extra? or is it tones down a bit?

JoJo_Soni:read novel's extra. you will like it. i think this is the novel which inspired the trope of author getting transmigrated into his own book.
Shin_Chan_5334
Shin_Chan_5334Lv4

Is the level of misunderstanding troupe as bad as it was in novel's extra? or is it tones down a bit?

JoJo_Soni:read novel's extra. you will like it. i think this is the novel which inspired the trope of author getting transmigrated into his own book.
Shah_Masari
Shah_MasariLv3

I know man

HeavenCelestial
HeavenCelestialLv1

Yeah i too have the same opinion. I just started to read novels not too long ago but i really love it. this is so easy to read out of all. Though i cant read the full chapter because i don't have any money to unlock the locked chapters, still i love reading it. it's just soo frustrating that i cant read all of the chapters, maybe one day.

TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3

Yeah, you're right. This book is a master piece!

HeavenCelestial:Yeah i too have the same opinion. I just started to read novels not too long ago but i really love it. this is so easy to read out of all. Though i cant read the full chapter because i don't have any money to unlock the locked chapters, still i love reading it. it's just soo frustrating that i cant read all of the chapters, maybe one day.
sleepy_reader_
sleepy_reader_Lv3

thanks for the review i’ll try it out!

in_progress123
in_progress123Lv4

can't he take the masochist 5star art and use monarch's indifference to bear the pain?

Naledi_Mathe
Naledi_MatheLv12

interesting take

DaoistCrMNP6
DaoistCrMNP6Lv1

ya

KAstral
KAstralLv12

Thx for the review

Azriel_Valentine
Azriel_ValentineLv4

maybe the manual is a long term pain while,monarch's indifferent is a short term cause of the time limit

in_progress123:can't he take the masochist 5star art and use monarch's indifference to bear the pain?
Na_na_4593
Na_na_4593Lv12

:0 khr- never thought i see the day where i see them in webnovel.

SL_FUN_STORE
SL_FUN_STORELv2

yes,perfect one.hardly see any flow.

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