Item: The Ruined Death Knight
Rating: 3
Author: Mathdebate

MathdebateLv13yr

2021-12-03 19:39

Starts off great besides some weird grammar mistakes, his reason for his hatred for humanity is questionable but if you close your eyes, tilt your head and squint a little it kinda makes sense? BUT The author starts going on a path where it slowly and slowly becomes more and more uncomfortable to read. Attacks and kills some party of noble kids trying to get his best friends sword back? Sure! Yea go for it. Attacks and slaughters a garrison full of men where the author goes into great detail about an underdog character with a great character and an unborn child with a loving wife at home? Sure...? lil weird but go for it. Attacks and slaughters a slave caravan that was attacking a village? Yeaaa!!! No problems here- wait your slaughtering the villagers too? Innocent woman abt the be r-ped? Kill her! Slaves chained in a wagon? Kill them all!, 3 dark elves with an older sister and 2 younger twins that the older sisters very protective over? Kill her- wait but plot armour says you cant because of a curse on them... Cripple the older sister! The plot continues on like this becoming darker and darker and not even an enjoyable dark. Unless you are mentally unhinged, I don't really see the appeal in reading a story that humanizes the victims before killing them only to try and portray the main character as some sort of human happy mind with positive innuendoes in his self-dialogue. TLDR: This is like the NTR category of anti-hero where it's not even anti-hero and more sociopath.

The Ruined Death Knight

Allenheim

4.2

448 Chs

Liked by 68 people

Replies23

MathdebateLv1

Forgot to mention this in my review but later on, with the weirdly specified garrison soldier, the author writes about how his unborn daughter was born and the wife dies in childbirth not knowing the husband's dead too so I don't know why the author really writes abt it? It's like reading this is like watching someone cuck your wife is the sort of feeling the story gives off. Stopped reading around where he kills all the slaves, I'm not into being cucked.

3yr

Mr_BabblesLv15

thanks for the info, I'm not going to read it

Mathdebate:Forgot to mention this in my review but later on, with the weirdly specified garrison soldier, the author writes about how his unborn daughter was born and the wife dies in childbirth not knowing the husband's dead too so I don't know why the author really writes abt it? It's like reading this is like watching someone cuck your wife is the sort of feeling the story gives off. Stopped reading around where he kills all the slaves, I'm not into being cucked.

3yr

Intuition_0070Lv14

I think you didn't like the fact that he is an UNDEAD who naturally HATE living beings. there is no logic in his hate because he is simply a undead and as such hate life. This is why he has no empathy for them, he can only be curious about. He doesn't spare them because by killing them he become stronger, and since as a undead he isn't restrain by moral or principle he just take the most efficient path to power for him by killing, because he is a MONSTER. Personnaly I prefer this way, I'm not fan of humanised monster. BUT, I agree with you about the human guard view point part of the story. I don't see the use behind it for now.

3yr

TheOnlyKingLv4

Wow, good job. You just made me want to read this.

3yr

MathdebateLv1

Whatever floats your boat ( ͡° ل͜ ͡°)

TheOnlyKing:Wow, good job. You just made me want to read this.

3yr

TyrantKing_AntaresLv3

Yep I Am Definitely Gonna Read I Love This Kind Of Stories

3yr

Ball_Shaving_GuLv14

Thank you man, all the things u think are wrong are what making me read the story even more😂its better than all the other non human stories where they turn human again in 2 chaps

3yr

Snow_JadeStarLv15

Thanks for putting my thoughts into words, sadly I didn't see this review until I also got to the slaver part. Feel like the synopsis tricked me... its only a path of ruination nothing else

3yr

SorcererCatLv5

Thaks for the heads up. You just saved me from wasting my time to start to read this to just have to drop it later.

3yr

KIINGLv14

Great. Thanks for letting us know that is really a dark mc novel and not a fake one.

3yr

Captain_FighterLv1

Thx for the review I understand the concept a little and will definitely read it cause I'm tired of heroic type mc's.

3yr

reboot23Lv4

sounds interesting, I'll test the waters

3yr

VirtualabLv3

Почему я раньше не прочитал ваш обзор? Сэкономил бы время и нервы...

3yr

SiminalaLv3

I won't read but yeah what's with all mcs becoming human in like 5 chaps

Ball_Shaving_Gu:Thank you man, all the things u think are wrong are what making me read the story even more😂its better than all the other non human stories where they turn human again in 2 chaps

3yr

Ball_Shaving_GuLv14

Author bait people into reading their novels by using the non human trope because a lot of people are looking for it, and then switch. I find it disgusting honestly.

Siminala:I won't read but yeah what's with all mcs becoming human in like 5 chaps

3yr

WhostEistLv4

What the fqk

3yr

Liam_CarollaLv1

Dude, I read through your comments three times with a smile on my face. It felt like I could hear you say it like you were right besides me. Your humor is king🔥

2yr

KrindsrLv13

you've sold me to this novel lol

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FrizepizeLv14

I thank you for the review I'm fapping happy that you review about the novel not ,outright compliant you don't like because you felt like it so you don't like.

2yr

FrizepizeLv14

fapping *really

Frizepize:I thank you for the review I'm fapping happy that you review about the novel not ,outright compliant you don't like because you felt like it so you don't like.

2yr

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