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Rex_Harris
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2021-10-12 13:31

The novel is good but fairly unpolished. I really enjoy non human MC and this book is an interesting Undead MC story. The world is interesting and charecter is alright, it could use work but since its an undead MC its not bad. The story is okay but there are a few things that dont make sense or kill suspense. There are POV changes that are done pretty well. Overal I enjoyed reading. THE PROBLEM: the biggest problem with this novel is that the are a decent amount of spelling and grammer errors. This would be what ever if it was free but its premium and after Unlocking the first few chapters it still didnt get better. I feel like a premium story should at least be spell checked. This is the biggest issue I had with the novel.

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