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TheWorthyOne
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2022-08-05 07:14

I love the story and I would give it 5 stars if the Author thought a little bit more about the plot. Examples: spoiler:Tead at your own risk. A example is that trillionare who collapsed in debt.He could have just not paid, because he has a Nations backing so nobody could force him to. Or right now when the world has collapsed the Author makes it so that the past currency is still as important,when you cant even buy anything. Another example is that at one point in the story where the world system has already collapsed the MC cares that Ethan Grey ownes an Island.He could have just taken over a Island and nobody could have stopped him.

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Raj_Shah_7152
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lol , thanks for this review I will reflect on the points you have mentioned

DaoistYuuishi
DaoistYuuishiLv2

Thats not how buisness investing works whatsoever they bought out all his costomers and liquited the shares collapsing his buisness by half aka the money he keeps in the buisness itself and all investors pulled out also for the multiple slaps to the face his stocks crumbled when every investor in your buisness goes down unless you stopped accepting investors in beginning which he didnt they build up which is the point of money gaining in investments you loose 25-50% of profits + his workers gone 10% gone shares gone another 20% gone so 55-75% of his buisness gone already + them blowing up his main income source we can safely say after all this anywhere from 85-99% of his money is gone

TheWorthyOne
TheWorthyOneLv14

but even 10% of his money is a lot. And another thing is that the country hes in needs his business because he controls the food supply, so from beginning to end how they went about the thing was wrong. No country would accept such a result, because food is their lifeline. If they lose their food source they wont have food anymore. They can naturally buy, but they dont have the connections to buy enough food for a good price. So they would come to a dead end and IF they decide to use military force it would be bad, because as said at the begging each country has very strong weapons at or above Nuclear missiles calibar. You should realise that a country with and without nuclear missiles is a completely different concept.

DaoistYuuishi:Thats not how buisness investing works whatsoever they bought out all his costomers and liquited the shares collapsing his buisness by half aka the money he keeps in the buisness itself and all investors pulled out also for the multiple slaps to the face his stocks crumbled when every investor in your buisness goes down unless you stopped accepting investors in beginning which he didnt they build up which is the point of money gaining in investments you loose 25-50% of profits + his workers gone 10% gone shares gone another 20% gone so 55-75% of his buisness gone already + them blowing up his main income source we can safely say after all this anywhere from 85-99% of his money is gone
TheWorthyOne
TheWorthyOneLv14

I think u don't know how the world works. U can't force a powerful country to hold its promise. Like lets say the US breaks one of its promises, they would lose a lot of credibility but who could force them not to break their promise? Important to note is that according to the author each country has very strong weapons and that company losing its money means the country losing its food source

DaoistYuuishi:Thats not how buisness investing works whatsoever they bought out all his costomers and liquited the shares collapsing his buisness by half aka the money he keeps in the buisness itself and all investors pulled out also for the multiple slaps to the face his stocks crumbled when every investor in your buisness goes down unless you stopped accepting investors in beginning which he didnt they build up which is the point of money gaining in investments you loose 25-50% of profits + his workers gone 10% gone shares gone another 20% gone so 55-75% of his buisness gone already + them blowing up his main income source we can safely say after all this anywhere from 85-99% of his money is gone
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