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EnnaiRe
EnnaiReLv103yr
2021-09-11 18:28

A review for the free chapters: A light read of your typical MMORPG player regressor novel. The MC is moving too fast, might be due to impatience of wanting to clean up regrets.. For a web novel pace, the story is moving too fast that might cause the story to lose steam around 300 chapters in if the pace is kept. Writing quality is what you would expect from a non native English speaker with low novel writing experience. Much to be desired but much better compared to MTL. Characters so far with 40 chapters are still founded on clichès with the possibility of growth.. Verdict: A better read than most if you've already read the better alternatives.

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Kinha_MTG
Kinha_MTGLv2

i forgot where the free chaps end but the pace does slow down a lot from the start when he was doing 3 major game changers a chapter. the pace is fast but there is still a ocean of things to do. SPOILER ALERT⚠ like becoming the king the *insert name i forgot*, making it an empire again, becoming a T6, Vr Olympics, etc

inazuma
inazumaLv1

His name is crevatz91 or sth like dat

Kinha_MTG:i forgot where the free chaps end but the pace does slow down a lot from the start when he was doing 3 major game changers a chapter. the pace is fast but there is still a ocean of things to do. SPOILER ALERT⚠ like becoming the king the *insert name i forgot*, making it an empire again, becoming a T6, Vr Olympics, etc
Ancient_Rebel
Ancient_RebelLv12

What's MTL

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