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2022-02-21 02:29

Here is my review after more than 170 chapters: My subjective opinion: I will cut this one short. The novel is excellent, and I will read it till the end. The author takes the effort with every update, and you can see that he cares about the readers. There is only one negative thing about the novel: the writing quality. Writing Quality: Annoying to read. Why? The author doesn't care about the numbers and sometimes uses the Indian metric system, which is a grave mistake. The math is so wrong sometimes. Oh boy. The chapters are also claimed to be edited, but I still see a lot of grammatical errors such as typos like theives instead of thieves and such. Update Stability: Excellent. 2, sometimes three chapters a day. The author delivers on the bonus chapter promises and is consistent. Story Development: It is not unique; however, the author cares about the story. The characters have personalities and backgrounds. The story is easy to follow, and you won't find many plot holes. The story concentrates mainly on the game, but the real-life part is just as enjoyable. In short: The story will keep you interested. Characters Design: Maybe the best part of this novel. Well thought out deep characters with easy-to-remember background stories. World Background: Getting more complex as the chapters go. The gaming world of omega is very deep and still mostly unexplored. There is a lot of foreshadowing about the other races, strong NPC's, and the past. The real-life is mainly focused around the characters and not built up. Countries such as country P country J country X and six trillionaires rule this world. We get to know more about MC and his family. You can also smell romance in the air. Afterword: The story starts just like every other VRMMO story, but the author got hooked and built his own world. I thoroughly enjoy every chapter, and this is the first-ever novel where I dumped all my coins.

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Raj_Shah_7152
Raj_Shah_7152Author

Thankyou for the wonderful review

vhfprgjsdfdhj
vhfprgjsdfdhjLv12

I actually regret not writing this review after I finished reading all the chapters. Now it feels like as if I wrote an incomplete review. Still, I'm happy you pinned it and I hope it will give at least some insight to new readers.

Raj_Shah_7152:Thankyou for the wonderful review
5Shade
5ShadeLv2

Anything you would like to add?

vhfprgjsdfdhj:I actually regret not writing this review after I finished reading all the chapters. Now it feels like as if I wrote an incomplete review. Still, I'm happy you pinned it and I hope it will give at least some insight to new readers.
vhfprgjsdfdhj
vhfprgjsdfdhjLv12

Yes, now that I reached chapter 400 the story deepened. New places got introduced and the game started to influence the real world as well. The author gave a good explanation on how and it makes me look forward to the next chapters knowing that there is so much more that can happen

5Shade:Anything you would like to add?
DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

is this good?does it have a solid character like cool males etc.(cuz i don't like harem) does it have a good plot?does it have world building and stuff?

DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

does it also have illustrations?

vhfprgjsdfdhj
vhfprgjsdfdhjLv12

It does have world building. I don't know if it's harem or not because the MC didn't choose any girl so far but I don't recommend dropping the book even if it turns out to be harem. Characters have personality of course.

DaoistZawSPm:is this good?does it have a solid character like cool males etc.(cuz i don't like harem) does it have a good plot?does it have world building and stuff?
DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

does it have illustration then

vhfprgjsdfdhj:It does have world building. I don't know if it's harem or not because the MC didn't choose any girl so far but I don't recommend dropping the book even if it turns out to be harem. Characters have personality of course.
DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

is it making his guild the strongest?

vhfprgjsdfdhj:It does have world building. I don't know if it's harem or not because the MC didn't choose any girl so far but I don't recommend dropping the book even if it turns out to be harem. Characters have personality of course.
vhfprgjsdfdhj
vhfprgjsdfdhjLv12

No. I joined the discord server but haven't found any original art yet.

DaoistZawSPm:does it have illustration then
vhfprgjsdfdhj
vhfprgjsdfdhjLv12

Yes and actually more than that but I won't spoiler

DaoistZawSPm:is it making his guild the strongest?
DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

he is't the only male in his guild?is he?

DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

well that was kinda dissapoitment

vhfprgjsdfdhj:No. I joined the discord server but haven't found any original art yet.
vhfprgjsdfdhj
vhfprgjsdfdhjLv12

No.. It's a proper guild

DaoistZawSPm:he is't the only male in his guild?is he?
DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

how?

vhfprgjsdfdhj:No.. It's a proper guild
vhfprgjsdfdhj
vhfprgjsdfdhjLv12

They pick members based on qualities.

DaoistZawSPm:how?
DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

ohhhhhhh now WE TALKING

vhfprgjsdfdhj:They pick members based on qualities.
DaoistZawSPm
DaoistZawSPmLv1

at what chapter did english become better?

vhfprgjsdfdhj:They pick members based on qualities.
Elveyst
ElveystLv3

Well ive read the description it sounds like “reincarnation of the strongest sword god”copy paste but ill give it a try.

inazuma
inazumaLv1

cough cough remember to join the discord BTW cough cough

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