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2021-06-16 00:36

Fresh take on an aldready overexplored genre , the first few chapters are good ..... Waiting for more The character development is excellent .... Waiting to see how he earns enough money to save his mother

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Raj_Shah_7152
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Thankyou , hope you will find my story entertaining

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AlanduardoLv14

Sim exatamente

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Here is my review after more than 170 chapters: My subjective opinion: I will cut this one short. The novel is excellent, and I will read it till the end. The author takes the effort with every update, and you can see that he cares about the readers. There is only one negative thing about the novel: the writing quality. Writing Quality: Annoying to read. Why? The author doesn't care about the numbers and sometimes uses the Indian metric system, which is a grave mistake. The math is so wrong sometimes. Oh boy. The chapters are also claimed to be edited, but I still see a lot of grammatical errors such as typos like theives instead of thieves and such. Update Stability: Excellent. 2, sometimes three chapters a day. The author delivers on the bonus chapter promises and is consistent. Story Development: It is not unique; however, the author cares about the story. The characters have personalities and backgrounds. The story is easy to follow, and you won't find many plot holes. The story concentrates mainly on the game, but the real-life part is just as enjoyable. In short: The story will keep you interested. Characters Design: Maybe the best part of this novel. Well thought out deep characters with easy-to-remember background stories. World Background: Getting more complex as the chapters go. The gaming world of omega is very deep and still mostly unexplored. There is a lot of foreshadowing about the other races, strong NPC's, and the past. The real-life is mainly focused around the characters and not built up. Countries such as country P country J country X and six trillionaires rule this world. We get to know more about MC and his family. You can also smell romance in the air. Afterword: The story starts just like every other VRMMO story, but the author got hooked and built his own world. I thoroughly enjoy every chapter, and this is the first-ever novel where I dumped all my coins.

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