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EmbieLv144mth
2024-09-19 21:07

I’m currently on chapter 1196 and I’d like to express my appreciation as well as my dissatisfaction for this great piece Overall it is a great book buh it’s slowing falling apart in my opinion , characters feel alive, world building and lore is excellent. But my turn off is how certain characters behave at certain times. Take the moon princess for one, she might think she’s doing him good buh she’s slowly pushing him to madness, when the dragon of death was escaping she could have prompted him buh nope “he has to learn his lesson the hard way” what if jue Kong managed to kill one of his people in the future??? And also with the guy who managed to control the earth, she knew he was no match and could have intervened when he begged but no, it served as an avenue for the author to pull new powers outta his bottom to add more plot armor… and let’s not forget that the moon princess lived because he sacrificed part of the power that could have mad him more stronger so in the end she’s an ungrateful selfish individual who thinks she’s doing it for the ‘bigger picture’.. and Xing Chen’s character feels forced and a bit overpowered I mean, unless the author states that he can see some snippets of the future I would say he is a fraudulent character… MC is a Simp Welp this is just me venting 😤

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